@raitryna
TikTok · Vlog
@raitryna Retail therapy w Rai: buying my first suit #fashion #mensfashion #suit #luxury #Vlog
@raitryna
TikTok · Vlog
@raitryna Retail therapy w Rai: buying my first suit #fashion #mensfashion #suit #luxury #Vlog
Performance
Video #12329 · Vlog
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The creator goes shopping for his first suit, starting at Nordstrom and then moving to Macy's with his father. He tries on different suits, shirts, ties, and shoes, ultimately selecting a blue suit with a white shirt, black tie, and brown shoes. He gets measured, selects his outfit, and then reveals the final cost after a discount.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
Buying my 1st Suit 🤵 $1,000 budget
Verbal hook · 5%
I've never owned a suit in my life, but today we're gonna find out how much it worst to buy a fancy suit.
Visual hook
The creator is standing in a parking lot, looking directly at the camera and gesturing with his hands.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
State the shopping goal and budget to set expectations.
Payoff
Reveal the final cost, including any discounts.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
Budgeted Fashion Transformation
A person with a set budget goes shopping for a specific item, showcasing the process and final cost.
The Initial Misstep
Attempt to shop at a high-end store, immediately exceeding the budget.
The Backup Call
Introduce a supporting character to aid in the shopping process.
The Discovery Phase
Explore various options at a more affordable store.
The Love Connection
Express strong liking for a specific item.
The Full Fit Assembly
Combine the main item with complementary accessories.
The Approval Check
Seek validation from the supporting character.
The Transformation Reveal
Showcase the complete look and express satisfaction.
The Price Prediction
Estimate the total cost before checkout.
Retail therapy w Rai: buying my first suit #fashion #mensfashion #suit #luxury #Vlog
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OWNED
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MUCH
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FANCY
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MISTAKE,
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DANIEL,
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PRINCESS.
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PRINCESS.
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700.
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YOU
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TIE,
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SHOES.
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700?
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LET'S
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TOGETHER,
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$816.
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20%
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GRAND
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$653.
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EVER
I've never owned a suit in my life, but today we're gonna find out how much it worst to buy a fancy suit. I went straight to Nordstrom, which was a mistake because even breathing the Nordstrom tier put me over my budget, so I had to call in some backup. Shout out papa Trine. From tier, we headed over to Macy's where we met this fine gentleman named Daniel who took such great care of us, showed me so many good options, and I fell in love with two suits right away. So much so that I started practicing my proposal skills. Are you kidding me? Once I finally decided on this stunning blue suit, it was time to put the full fit better. That means shirt, shoes, tie, and pocket square. After trying on a few different options, I decided to go with a white fitted shirt and a black tie with some blue floral accents on it. As far as the shoes, I have a bunch of black shoes, but I felt like brown shoes would be best for this outfit. What do you think? Jordan, you look like a prince. Now we need a princess. We need a princess. That's right. That's right. I'll let you boy. I cannot freaking believe I went twenty six years without ever owning a suit because your boy feels like a million bucks right now. What do you think the damage is gonna be? Because I think it's gonna be, like, 700. What do you think? Yeah. You're approximately right. For everything, shirt, tie, pants, suit, shoes, 700. Yeah. Let's find out. So altogether, everything came out to $816, but I got a 20% discount bringing the grand total of $653. If you're ever in the West Palm Beach or Palm Beach Gardens area rank you need a suit, go ahead with my rank, Daniel at Macy's. Thank you so much.