@lolayounggg
TikTok · Performance Highlight
@lolayounggg plaster/bandaid = same thing btw but i wrote this just now.. i like it, it is everything i’m feeling atm ..
@lolayounggg
TikTok · Performance Highlight
@lolayounggg plaster/bandaid = same thing btw but i wrote this just now.. i like it, it is everything i’m feeling atm ..
Performance
Video #13625 · Performance Highlight
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The creator starts by announcing she has written a new song called "Blisters," explaining it might be on a future album. She then performs a snippet of the song, playing an acoustic guitar and singing emotionally while the lyrics appear as text overlays. After the performance, she shares some final thoughts about her songwriting process and the potential future of the song.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
I just wrote a new song
Verbal hook · 40%
It's written new song.
Visual hook · 5%
A close-up, direct-to-camera shot of the creator holding an acoustic guitar, establishing an intimate and personal setting for a musical performance.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A direct, high-value announcement of a new, unreleased piece of work, immediately establishing the video's purpose and creating intrigue.
Payoff
The Open Loop: The video concludes by creating ambiguity about the creation's future, leaving the audience invested and encouraging speculation and engagement about what might happen next.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Raw Creation Showcase
To build intimacy and investment by sharing a new, unreleased creation and then immediately following it with a vulnerable, behind-the-scenes commentary, creating a sense of exclusive access for the viewer.
The Exclusivity Frame
Positions the upcoming reveal as a special, behind-the-scenes preview by explaining why it's not part of the main, upcoming release schedule. This increases the perceived value and scarcity of the content.
The Formal Introduction
Gives the creation a title, which acts as a formal 'title card' moment that transitions the viewer from the setup into the core performance.
The Emotional Performance
The central beat where the creation is delivered in a raw, unfiltered format. The performance is designed to build and release emotional tension, serving as the primary value delivery of the video.
The Vulnerable Coda
Immediately after the performance, the creator breaks the fourth wall and shares a candid, self-aware, or slightly imperfect reflection on the performance or creative process. This shatters the performer's persona and builds a strong, authentic connection with the audience.
plaster/bandaid = same thing btw but i wrote this just now.. i like it, it is everything i’m feeling atm ..
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I just wrote a new song
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it's not going on the album I'm dropping next
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but it might be on the one after that
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who knows?!!!
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here's a snippet
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it's called blisters
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I sit back and watch the water run
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'cause six months ago I turned the tap on
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I don't feel old I don't feel young
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I'm in between a feeling
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there's no divine deeper meaning
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I won't take a walk but sure I'll jump
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say I don't care just cause it sounds tough
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but I had a dream I pulled the plug
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and I didn't wanna wake
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but I woke up
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in this dark dingy house
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I've been here for far too long
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it feels wrong
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I've got the whole world
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right in my hands
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so why does it slip through my fingers
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I just don't understand
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why life keeps giving me blisters
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even in the best pair of shoes that I have
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my mate says 'they don't even fit ya'
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but I just don't understand
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why life keeps giving me blisters
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you can't put a plaster on that
It's written new song. It's not going on the album I'm dropping next, but it might be on the one after that. Who knows? Here's a snippet. It's called Best. I sit back and watch the water come. Six no come. Six months ago, I turned the tap on. I don't feel old. I don't feel young. I'm in between a feeling. There's no divine better meaning. I won't take a walk, but you're all Joan. Say I don't care best because it sounds tough. But I had a dream, I pulled the clock. And I didn't wanna wake, but I woke up in this dark dingy worse. I've been here for far too long. It feels warm. I've got the whole world right at my heart, so why does it slip through my fingers? I just don't understand why life keeps giving me blisters. Even in the best pair of shoes that I have, You can't put a plaster on that. You can't put a plaster on that. Yeah. You can't put a plaster on that. My mouth was dry, but there you go. And, I write virtually better day, so nothing may come of it, but maybe something will. I'm no I'm I'm better winking again.