@shaneohgolfs
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@shaneohgolfs How much would you pay to play here??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Greenscreen Talking Head
@shaneohgolfs How much would you pay to play here??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
Performance
Video #17173 · Greenscreen Talking Head
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The creator makes a claim that golf is innovating like no other sport. He supports this by showcasing three examples of extravagant, custom-built golf courses by famous athletes: Tiger Woods, Mike Trout, and Michael Jordan, detailing their unique features. He then introduces a new, futuristic project, the "Megalodome," an indoor, full-scale golf course in Chicago, describes its features, asks for a follow, and ends by asking viewers how much they would pay to play there.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
🚨BREAKING NEWS🚨
Verbal hook · 40%
There is no other sport that can do what golf is doing.
Visual hook · 15%
A speaker is layered over a large, smiling photo of Tiger Woods, with a prominent red "BREAKING NEWS" banner at the top of the screen, creating a visually dense and attention-grabbing opening frame.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A bold, superlative statement that establishes the video's thesis and challenges the viewer's perception of a topic, framed as 'Breaking News' to create urgency.
Payoff
The viewer is left with a new perspective on the topic, having been convinced by the escalating evidence and intrigued by the future possibilities, prompting them to engage with the final question.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Escalating Proof Blueprint
To prove a bold, superlative claim by presenting a series of increasingly impressive examples, culminating in a future-focused reveal that solidifies the argument.
The Foundational Proof
Presents the first and most relevant example (an icon from within the topic's own field) to establish a baseline of credibility for the initial claim.
The Crossover Proof
Introduces a second example from an adjacent, popular field to demonstrate the topic's broad appeal and influence, highlighting specific, extravagant features.
The Apex Proof
Deploys the ultimate example by using a universally recognized icon (the 'GOAT' from another field) to represent the pinnacle of the trend, emphasizing exclusivity.
The Future Pivot
A transitional statement that shifts the narrative from documenting past achievements to teasing a future innovation, creating anticipation for a final reveal.
The Novelty Reveal
Unveils a groundbreaking, never-before-seen concept that serves as the ultimate evidence for the initial claim, positioning the topic as a forward-thinking industry.
The Relatability Injection
The creator briefly breaks the formal tone to offer a humorous, common-sense critique of a minor detail, building rapport and authenticity with the audience.
The Spec Sheet Breakdown
Provides concrete details and specifications about the new concept to ground the futuristic idea in reality and add a layer of informative value.
The Engagement Loop
A direct, hypothetical question posed to the audience that relates personally to the final reveal, designed to convert passive viewership into active comments.
How much would you pay to play here??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
title · beginning
🚨BREAKING NEWS🚨
informational · middle
MEGALODOME GOLF is bringing the world's first full-scale, climate-controlled indoor 9-hole course to Oswego, Illinois. The 270,000-square-foot facility is built for year-round play.
Tier is no other sport that can do what golf is doing. We've seen Tiger Woods build a $100,000,000 golf worse, Trout National, for none other than Mike Trout, that has absurd features like tunnels that vehicles have to drive through no that the members can be fully immersed in golf and see nothing else, as well as dugouts on the worse, a full blown barbershop with a full time barber. We have seen the greatest basketball player to ever live, Michael Jordan, build his own golf course, Tier Grove, which is so insanely private that if you are even invited by a member, Michael Jordan has to approve it. And now we're seeing golf do something that has never been done, the Megaladome. Also, if you like all things golf, make sure you're following. We gotta work on the name no because Megaladome is the worst thing I've ever heard. But this will be the world's first full scale indoor golf course. This 270,000 square foot facility will be built in the suburbs of Chicago. And this will be full scale, so you're talking water hazards, fairway bunkers, all the above. And from the released images, it also looks like they're planning to have restaurants and maybe even a place to stay. Now when will this be built and ready to play? Who knows? But I wanna know. If you live in a place where in the winter you cannot play golf, how much would you pay to play the megalodon?