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@shaneohgolfs How much would you pay to play here??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp

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Video #17173 · Greenscreen Talking Head

Creator reports on golf projectsfrom @shaneohgolfs

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Overview

The creator makes a claim that golf is innovating like no other sport. He supports this by showcasing three examples of extravagant, custom-built golf courses by famous athletes: Tiger Woods, Mike Trout, and Michael Jordan, detailing their unique features. He then introduces a new, futuristic project, the "Megalodome," an indoor, full-scale golf course in Chicago, describes its features, asks for a follow, and ends by asking viewers how much they would pay to play there.

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Simple outline

  1. 1Make a bold claim
  2. 2Provide escalating examples
  3. 3Reveal a future concept
  4. 4Ask a direct question

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Classification

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Elements
Image OverlayFollow / Subscribe CTAEngagement CTATitle Text Hook

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 45%

🚨BREAKING NEWS🚨

Verbal hook · 40%

There is no other sport that can do what golf is doing.

Visual hook · 15%

A speaker is layered over a large, smiling photo of Tiger Woods, with a prominent red "BREAKING NEWS" banner at the top of the screen, creating a visually dense and attention-grabbing opening frame.

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

A bold, superlative statement that establishes the video's thesis and challenges the viewer's perception of a topic, framed as 'Breaking News' to create urgency.

Payoff

The viewer is left with a new perspective on the topic, having been convinced by the escalating evidence and intrigued by the future possibilities, prompting them to engage with the final question.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Escalating Proof Blueprint

To prove a bold, superlative claim by presenting a series of increasingly impressive examples, culminating in a future-focused reveal that solidifies the argument.

  1. 1

    The Foundational Proof

    Presents the first and most relevant example (an icon from within the topic's own field) to establish a baseline of credibility for the initial claim.

  2. 2

    The Crossover Proof

    Introduces a second example from an adjacent, popular field to demonstrate the topic's broad appeal and influence, highlighting specific, extravagant features.

  3. 3

    The Apex Proof

    Deploys the ultimate example by using a universally recognized icon (the 'GOAT' from another field) to represent the pinnacle of the trend, emphasizing exclusivity.

  4. 4

    The Future Pivot

    A transitional statement that shifts the narrative from documenting past achievements to teasing a future innovation, creating anticipation for a final reveal.

  5. 5

    The Novelty Reveal

    Unveils a groundbreaking, never-before-seen concept that serves as the ultimate evidence for the initial claim, positioning the topic as a forward-thinking industry.

  6. 6

    The Relatability Injection

    The creator briefly breaks the formal tone to offer a humorous, common-sense critique of a minor detail, building rapport and authenticity with the audience.

  7. 7

    The Spec Sheet Breakdown

    Provides concrete details and specifications about the new concept to ground the futuristic idea in reality and add a layer of informative value.

  8. 8

    The Engagement Loop

    A direct, hypothetical question posed to the audience that relates personally to the final reveal, designed to convert passive viewership into active comments.

Themes

  • Innovation in sports
  • Luxury lifestyle
  • Sports business
  • Athlete entrepreneurship

Techniques

  • Greenscreen effect
  • Fast-paced narration
  • Visual storytelling

Trends

  • News-style reporting
  • Sports commentary

Post caption

How much would you pay to play here??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    🚨BREAKING NEWS🚨

  • informational · middle

    MEGALODOME GOLF is bringing the world's first full-scale, climate-controlled indoor 9-hole course to Oswego, Illinois. The 270,000-square-foot facility is built for year-round play.

Transcript

Tier is no other sport that can do what golf is doing. We've seen Tiger Woods build a $100,000,000 golf worse, Trout National, for none other than Mike Trout, that has absurd features like tunnels that vehicles have to drive through no that the members can be fully immersed in golf and see nothing else, as well as dugouts on the worse, a full blown barbershop with a full time barber. We have seen the greatest basketball player to ever live, Michael Jordan, build his own golf course, Tier Grove, which is so insanely private that if you are even invited by a member, Michael Jordan has to approve it. And now we're seeing golf do something that has never been done, the Megaladome. Also, if you like all things golf, make sure you're following. We gotta work on the name no because Megaladome is the worst thing I've ever heard. But this will be the world's first full scale indoor golf course. This 270,000 square foot facility will be built in the suburbs of Chicago. And this will be full scale, so you're talking water hazards, fairway bunkers, all the above. And from the released images, it also looks like they're planning to have restaurants and maybe even a place to stay. Now when will this be built and ready to play? Who knows? But I wanna know. If you live in a place where in the winter you cannot play golf, how much would you pay to play the megalodon?