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@bigjohngolfs EVERY SHOT=FOG MACHINE 😮💨🤑 ALL HEART ❤️ ALL FOG 🌫️
@bigjohngolfs
Instagram · Vlog
@bigjohngolfs EVERY SHOT=FOG MACHINE 😮💨🤑 ALL HEART ❤️ ALL FOG 🌫️
Performance
Video #25185 · Vlog
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The creator attempts a 'fog it up par 3' golf challenge, where he must take a hit from a vape pen before every shot. He starts with a successful tee shot that lands on the green, followed by a good chip shot. In between shots, he delivers a rambling, comedic monologue before ultimately missing the final putt and expressing frustration.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
FOG IT UP PAR 3 (EVERY SHOT=PEN RIP 😥)
Verbal hook · 15%
Fog it up part three.
Visual hook · 30%
An extreme close-up of the creator holding a vape pen directly in front of the camera lens, establishing the video's central theme immediately.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
The creator clearly states a specific challenge and a self-imposed, absurd rule that must be followed at every step, immediately establishing the video's premise and stakes.
Payoff
The challenge concludes with an anti-climactic resolution, often with assistance from another person, followed by a final statement of resignation or reflection that makes the failure feel earned and humorous.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Gimmick Gauntlet
The creator attempts a multi-step task while adhering to a self-imposed, absurd, and repetitive rule (the 'gimmick'). The narrative follows their journey through the task, blending moments of skill with moments of comedic personality and relatable failure.
The Ritualistic Commitment
The creator performs the gimmick for the first time, visually and audibly committing to the established rule before the main action begins.
The Flawless Execution
The first major step of the task is completed with impressive skill, providing an early payoff and establishing the creator's competence.
The Reinforcement Loop
The gimmick is repeated after the successful first step, reinforcing the core rule and creating a rhythmic pattern for the viewer.
The Soft Touch Recovery
A second, more delicate step of the task is executed well, showcasing a different dimension of skill and overcoming a minor obstacle.
The Comedic Inner Monologue
The creator delivers a whispered, rambling monologue that reveals a humorous and fragile inner state, creating a strong personality-driven connection with the audience that contrasts with the demonstrated skill.
The Pre-Climax Ritual
The gimmick is performed one last time to build tension and anticipation directly before the final, decisive action.
The Shocking Miss
The creator fails at the final, crucial step in a dramatic and frustrating way, subverting the expectation of a perfect outcome and creating a highly relatable moment of disappointment.
EVERY SHOT=FOG MACHINE 😮💨🤑 ALL HEART ❤️ ALL FOG 🌫️
title · beginning
FOG IT UP PAR 3 (EVERY SHOT=PEN RIP 😥)
Fog it up part three. Copy a blink. Come on. Fuck. Oh, yeah. Purified technician. No aging right now. Oh my gosh. Hands are so soft. Gotta work for it. Fuckers want me in Vaguey. Literally a walk in puddle. I've been a walk in puddle for weeks, Jimmy, between me and you. Like, right here. I, like, need therapy, and I need, like, a dark room. A dark room with, like, a bible under candlelight. Like, that's what I'm at. But this is what you need more. Oh, man. Are you fucking kidding me? Clean it up. Do a good clean up. Whole heart fall for more.