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@shaneohgolfs This quite possibly may go down as the worst broadcast in all of sports
@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Greenscreen Talking Head
@shaneohgolfs This quite possibly may go down as the worst broadcast in all of sports
Performance
Video #30343 · Greenscreen Talking Head
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The creator delivers a passionate critique of the CBS broadcast for the CJ Cup Byron Nelson golf tournament, labeling it the worst sports broadcast ever due to an excessive amount of commercials. He contrasts the poor viewing experience with the high-quality leaderboard, which included top players like Scottie Scheffler and Si Woo Kim. Despite his frustration with the broadcast, he concludes by acknowledging the phenomenal week of golf and Wyndham Clark's victory, before asking viewers for their opinions.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
This is 100% unexcusable
Verbal hook · 40%
What we just witnessed on the PGA Tour is inexcusable.
Visual hook · 5%
A speaker is positioned in the foreground with a prominent, high-contrast red text box overlay, set against a background image of a professional golfer on a course.
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Steal this for your own video
What just did is 100% inexcusable.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
An immediate, hyperbolic, and absolute statement of condemnation ('This is 100% unexcusable,' 'the worst ever') to generate instant intrigue and emotional investment.
Payoff
A direct question to the audience that circles back to the initial critique, inviting them to validate the creator's opinion and share their own experience, thereby converting passive viewing into active engagement.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Rant & Redeem
To hook viewers with an extreme negative critique of a popular event's presentation, validate that critique by highlighting the event's wasted potential, and then pivot to celebrate the event's core quality, concluding with a call for community agreement.
The Central Indictment
To clearly state the primary grievance or flaw that forms the basis of the entire critique, providing a specific target for the viewer's frustration.
The Evidence of Wasted Potential
To present a rapid-fire list of high-value, compelling elements that were mishandled or ignored, thereby proving the validity of the initial outrage and escalating the viewer's sense of frustration.
The 'But Still' Pivot
To create a tonal shift by acknowledging the inherent quality of the subject matter itself, separating the flawed presentation from the valuable core event. This adds nuance and credibility.
The Redeeming Highlight
To focus on a specific, positive outcome or success story from the event, providing a sense of positive resolution and celebrating the core subject despite the initial complaint.
This quite possibly may go down as the worst broadcast in all of sports
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This is 100% unexcusable
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WHAT WE JUST
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PGA TOUR IS INEXCUSABLE.
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THE BROADCAST OF
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THE CJ CUP
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BYRON NELSON WAS
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QUITE LITERALLY THE
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WORST BROADCAST OF
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ANY SPORTING EVENT EVER.
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What we just witnessed on the PGA Tier is inexcusable. The broadcast of the CJ Cup Byron Nelson was quite literally the worst broadcast of any sporting event ever. The amount of commercials on the CBS broadcast worse airtime of actual golf is mind blowing. And considering the leaderboard that we had, it makes it even more asinine. World number one golfer, Scottie Scheffler, right in contention. Si Woo Kim, quite possibly the most liked golfer across the entire world right in contention. Hell, we even had 19 year old Blaise Brown secure temporary status on the PGA tier. But we saw as much golf as we did GMC commercials. We even had cashmere Keith Mitchell in contention. But But aside from the absolutely abysmal, terrible, unexcusable broadcast, it was a phenomenal week of golf. No matter your opinions on this man right here, Wyndham Clark, he played rank almost flawless week of golf with two bogeys through four rounds. Also, if you wanna stay up to date on everything happening in the golf world, follow for more. And he even shot a 60 on the final round, finally stepping back into the winner's circle. But I have to no, if you watched that tournament today, what were your opinions on that broadcast?