@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Talking Head Edit
@shaneohgolfs What are we even doing anymore. The response to this has been absolutely ridiculous
@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Talking Head Edit
@shaneohgolfs What are we even doing anymore. The response to this has been absolutely ridiculous
Performance
Video #36524 · Talking Head Edit
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A creator provides commentary on recent press conferences from golfers Rory McIlroy and Scottie Scheffler. He shows clips of both athletes giving dismissive, existential answers to questions about their long-term legacies, discusses the divided public reaction, and questions the value of such questions from journalists during a major tournament.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
This is ABSURD
Verbal hook · 50%
Rory McIlroy has pissed off yet again,
Visual hook · 5%
A split-screen style shot with the creator in the foreground and a smiling Rory McIlroy in the background, overlaid with a large, bold red text box reading 'This is ABSURD'.
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Steal this for your own video
Everyone is divided on what just said about , and honestly, I get both sides.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
An immediate, high-emotion declaration of outrage or absurdity using bold text and charged language to signal a controversial topic and hook the viewer.
Payoff
Deliver a final, impassioned monologue that summarizes the creator's thesis and pivots into a direct, binary-choice question to the audience, explicitly asking them to take a side in the comments.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Evidence-Based Takedown
To present a controversial event, provide primary and corroborating video evidence, and then deliver a strong, concluding opinion that funnels viewers into a direct engagement prompt.
The Context Setter
Briefly establish the stakes and background necessary to understand the significance of the upcoming evidence (e.g., 'it's a championship,' 'this is required').
The Primary Evidence
Play an unedited or lightly edited clip that showcases the core controversial action or statement, allowing the 'receipts' to speak for themselves.
The Social Proof Amplifier
Return to camera to state that the event is causing widespread public debate ('the internet is going insane'), validating the topic's importance and the viewer's interest.
The Dismissive Judgment
Address and quickly dismantle the most extreme viewpoints on the issue with rhetorical questions, positioning the creator as a rational arbiter.
The Corroborating Evidence
Introduce and play a second piece of video evidence that supports the creator's thesis by showing a similar pattern or event, strengthening the overall argument.
What are we even doing anymore. The response to this has been absolutely ridiculous
title · beginning
This is ABSURD
informational · middle
How concerned are you with how you'll be viewed in 100 years?
title · middle
SCOTTIE SCHEFFLER: 'WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE'
call-to-action · end
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