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@alishamarie

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@alishamarie I got scammed by a CREATOR. story time on how I got scammed for a pair of shoes, but look out for part 2 of my shoe unboxing reveal because they’ll be coming later today 👡 #storytime #scammed #reveal

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Performance

Views
686.6K
Likes
63.2K
Comments
152
Engagement
9.2%
Outlier
9.5×
Length · 28 Jul 2026
1:30

Video #37660 · Speaker address

Creator tells story about scamfrom @alishamarie

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Overview

The creator recounts her experience of being scammed by an online business posing as a small, handmade shoe company. She explains how she was drawn in by a video showing the crafting process, but after ordering, she investigated their page and discovered they were using deceptive, possibly AI-generated videos with inconsistent stories. After realizing she would not receive the shoes and couldn't find a confirmation email, she learned from her podcast audience that the exact same shoes were available on Amazon for a much lower price, confirming the scam.

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Simple outline

  1. 1State a shocking accusation
  2. 2Recount the initial deception
  3. 3Reveal the unraveling evidence
  4. 4Expose the final truth
  5. 5Tease the next chapter

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Related videos

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Classification

Concepts
Storytime
Elements
B-Roll CutawaySocial Proof ScreenshotJump CutPodcast Setup

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 55%

I got scammed

Verbal hook · 40%

Story time about me getting fully scammed by a creator.

Visual hook · 5%

A medium close-up of the creator speaking directly and expressively into a microphone, creating an immediate sense of a personal story or podcast-style confession.

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Hook template

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I got [scammed/deceived] by a [business type]

  • — I got scammed by a 'handmade' shoe brand
  • — I got deceived by a luxury skincare company
  • — I got scammed by a small batch coffee roaster

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

A direct, high-stakes accusation that frames the creator as a victim of a relatable injustice, immediately creating intrigue and empathy.

Payoff

A resolution that involves the creator taking a new action to reclaim control of the narrative, which simultaneously serves as a powerful cliffhanger (an 'open loop') that explicitly promises a 'Part 2' to ensure audience return.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Investigative Takedown

The creator presents a personal story of being deceived, then walks the audience through their process of uncovering the truth, escalating the stakes with each new discovery before ending on a cliffhanger that promises a final resolution in a future video.

  1. 1

    The Idealistic Premise

    Establishes the creator's good intentions and the seemingly positive context of the initial interaction. This creates a sympathetic baseline before the conflict is introduced.

  2. 2

    The Post-Purchase Investigation

    The turning point where the creator's suspicion is triggered. This beat shifts the narrative from a simple story to an investigation, inviting the audience to solve the mystery alongside them.

  3. 3

    The Narrative Contradiction

    Presents the first piece of hard evidence of deception by highlighting inconsistencies in the perpetrator's story. This validates the creator's suspicion and builds the case.

  4. 4

    The Technical Deception Reveal

    Moves beyond narrative inconsistencies to expose the technical mechanics of the fraud (e.g., AI, deceptive editing). This positions the creator as an expert who has fully deconstructed the scam.

  5. 5

    The Escalation to Total Loss

    Raises the stakes by revealing that the consequences are worse than initially thought, shifting the problem from a simple misrepresentation to a potential complete financial loss.

  6. 6

    The Crowd-Sourced Climax

    Delivers the ultimate, often humiliating, truth about the deception, which has been discovered or confirmed by the creator's community. This provides a satisfying and definitive conclusion to the investigation.

Themes

  • Deception
  • Consumer awareness
  • Social media marketing
  • Authenticity

Techniques

  • Personal storytelling
  • Direct address
  • Chronological narrative

Trends

  • Storytime
  • Scam awareness

Post caption

I got scammed by a CREATOR. story time on how I got scammed for a pair of shoes, but look out for part 2 of my shoe unboxing reveal because they’ll be coming later today 👡 #storytime #scammed #reveal

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    I got scammed

  • contextual · middle

    What do yall think of them? 🥺❤️

  • contextual · middle

    @alishamarie they're on Amazon girl for a low cost of $50 lol 😂

  • contextual · end

    KXLJDJDBSOJAJS THOSE ARE THEM

Transcript

Story time about me getting fully scammed by a creator. So about a month ago, I'm on my phone, and I'm scrolling, and I come across this couple who has a small business. In the video, it shows them hand making it, cutting the leather, you know, putting all the labor and love into these shoes. And you know what? I'm gonna help support a small business. So I placed my order, and I'm really excited for these shoes to come in. After this, I'm feeling so good about myself, so I decide, let me go look at their page. In that moment, I think I realized that I got scammed because every single video is a different iteration of the video I watched, but completely different. This guy on the first one is saying, hey. Please help my wife out with her small business. The video next to it is the same exact clip, but instead of saying wife, it's saying my sister-in-law. The one after that is, like, oh, my mother. Like, the story is changing. Okay? Then I'm rewatching these videos. You guys, it's AI. It shows them, like, cutting a random piece of leather, and then it's like, boop. There is a perfect shoe. And then it gets worse because I'm thinking, okay. I probably just got scammed, and I'm getting a pair of shoes that I, you know, that obviously are not handmade, but I'm still gonna get the shoes. Then I go to try to find the tracking and the email saying that I bought these shoes. Can't find it. I talked about this story lightly on, my podcast, and I did get a few people saying, Alicia, you know, those shoes are available on Amazon. My exact, one of a kind, handcrafted cowboy mule heels are on Amazon for $50. Just for the bit, you know, because I wanted to feel something, I was like, I'm gonna buy these shoes off of Amazon just so I get I get the shoes. I'm gonna do an unboxing of my Amazon ones because they're gonna be delivered today, so look out for part two.

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