@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Talking Head Edit
@shaneohgolfs Just remember, we are ALL human beings
@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Talking Head Edit
@shaneohgolfs Just remember, we are ALL human beings
Performance
Video #40105 · Talking Head Edit
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The creator provides a detailed breakdown of the controversy surrounding a recent "Good Good Golf" advertisement for a Callaway driver. He shows the controversial clip, explains the significant fallout including a postponed TV show and merchandise being pulled from major retailers, and presents the apology video from co-founder Garrett Clark. He concludes by offering his own strong opinion on the ad's poor taste and the unacceptability of the actions depicted, while also calling for perspective and remembering that everyone involved is human.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
🚨 NOT so BREAKING NEWS 🚨
Verbal hook · 35%
We've got some not so breaking news in the golf world that we have to talk about.
Visual hook · 10%
A speaker addresses the camera against a bright blue background with a prominent, red and white title text overlay.
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🚨 NOT so 🚨
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Frame a known event as a 'must-discuss' topic, creating a sense of urgency and a curiosity gap for viewers who may be unaware of the full story.
Payoff
Elevate the specific issue into a broad, unifying message about shared human values, providing a sense of closure and a positive, high-minded takeaway.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Reasoned Takedown
To analyze a public controversy by presenting the initial event, detailing the escalating fallout, acknowledging the subject's response, and then delivering a firm but nuanced personal verdict that concludes with a universal moral.
The Provocation
Present the primary source material of the controversy (the ad clip) to establish the core conflict and give all viewers the same factual baseline.
The Domino Effect
Systematically reveal the escalating series of negative consequences (media postponement, retail backlash) to build tension and demonstrate the severity of the situation.
The Redemption Arc
Introduce the subject's attempt at reconciliation or explanation, showing direct evidence (the apology clip) of their response to the controversy.
The Opinion Pivot
Explicitly transition from reporting to commentary by directly addressing the audience, signaling a shift in the narrative and creating anticipation for the creator's personal take.
The Firm Judgment
Deliver an unambiguous moral verdict on the controversial action, aligning with audience sentiment and establishing the creator's ethical stance.
The Compassionate Caveat
Introduce nuance by separating the condemned action from the overall character of the individual involved, preventing a simple pile-on and showcasing a more thoughtful perspective.
Just remember, we are ALL human beings
title · beginning
🚨 NOT so BREAKING NEWS 🚨
title · middle
GOLF CHANNEL PROGRAMMING NOTE
informational · middle
GOLF CHANNEL IS POSTPONING TONIGHT'S PREMIERE OF BIG BREAK x GOOD GOOD TO NEXT TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 1. THIS WILL ALLOW FOR NECESSARY PRODUCTION UPDATES FOLLOWING A REQUEST FROM ONE OF THE SHOW'S BRANDING...
informational · middle
GG merchandise has now been removed from PGA Tour Superstore as fallout from the Callaway driver ad continues.
contextual · middle
HA HA HA HA!
Good some not so breaking news in the golf world that we have to talk about. And if somehow you did miss this, Good Good Golf produced an ad about a driver that not only has the golf world fighting against one another, but the entire world. Take a second and watch this. Uh-huh. Do not touch my new driver. Following that ad, they have postponed the return of Big Break because it was hosted by Good Good because the title sponsor sponsor wanted all of their logos removed from the edits. We have other golf brands capitalizing on their ad to promote their own product, and all Good products have been removed from Dick's Sporting Goods, Golf Galaxy, and PGA Superstores. Garrett Clark, the cofounder of GoodGood, the man who was in that bad, just released a video. Take just a second and watch this. He's gonna run over there and, fake tackle you. I didn't actually tackle Alexis. I know a lot of people do think that. I didn't do that. Aired in that same video goes on to take accountability for his actions and Good actions and also says that the ad was in extremely poor taste and that he even cringed when he watched it. But a lot of you guys wanna know my opinion. So here it is. And everybody listening to this video take a massive deep breath. Alright. We okay? Never will it ever be acceptable to touch, push, shove, arm bar a woman. That ad was terrible. It was rank extremely poor taste. I don't know how in the world it got approved. It was stupid. It was a dumb ad. I preach rank the game and grow the game the correct way, and whether you like it or not, little kids look up to Good and that ad was terrible. Do I think that Garrett Clark is a bad man or bad human being? Absolutely not. And I'll reiterate, it's never acceptable, never will be acceptable to touch a woman. And before you guys start bashing one another in the comments or bashing me, take another deep breath and just remember that we are all human beings.