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@propublica There’s an open secret in Major League Baseball: MLB teams routinely make handshake deals with young Dominican players, an informal system that has created perfect market conditions for predatory moneylenders. MLB signs more international players from the Dominican Republic than any other country. Despite widespread acknowledgement that Dominican baseball needs to be overhauled, the industry has only gotten worse. Watch ProPublica reporter Gus Garcia-Roberts break down his investigation into early agreements and the dangerous industry that has grown around them. Photography by Christopher Gregory-Rivera for ProPublica

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Video #43496 · Talking Head Edit

Exposing baseball's predatory recruiting systemfrom @propublica

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Overview

The creator, a ProPublica reporter, explains the exploitative system of how MLB teams recruit young players from the Dominican Republic. He uses the specific case study of player Belfi Rivera to illustrate how teams make illegal early agreements, which creates a market for predatory lenders who trap families in debt. The reporter details the financial breakdown of Rivera's contract, implicates baseball legend David Ortiz in blocking reform, and concludes by highlighting MLB's inaction on the issue.

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Simple outline

  1. 1State a shocking accusation
  2. 2Humanize the problem
  3. 3Expose the systemic flaw
  4. 4Reveal powerful enablers
  5. 5Deliver the final verdict

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 50%

This is the dirty truth

Verbal hook · 45%

This is the dirty truth of how Major League Baseball recruits young players from the Dominican Republic.

Visual hook · 5%

A blurry, high-action shot of a baseball player swinging a bat, creating a dramatic and mysterious opening that immediately establishes the topic and tone.

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Hook template

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The dirty truth about [industry practice]: [hidden harm]

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

A bold, conspiratorial statement that promises to reveal a hidden, scandalous truth about a well-known institution.

Payoff

A concluding statement that summarizes the investigation's damning findings, followed by on-screen text providing official statements or non-responses that serve as journalistic proof and leave the audience with a final, authoritative takeaway.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Investigative Escalation

To expose a systemic problem by starting with a provocative claim, grounding it in a personal story, and then systematically escalating the scope of blame from individual actors to the institutions and powerful figures who enable them.

  1. 1

    The Provocative Thesis

    State the central accusation upfront to immediately frame the narrative as an exposé and hook the viewer with the promise of a secret.

  2. 2

    The Emotional Stakes

    Establish why the topic matters on a human level by connecting it to a widely held dream or aspiration, creating audience investment.

  3. 3

    The Human Anchor

    Introduce a single, relatable individual whose story will serve as the primary vehicle for explaining the larger, more abstract problem.

  4. 4

    The Injustice Gap

    Create a stark contrast between a promised positive outcome and a negative reality for the human anchor, generating a mystery and a sense of unfairness that demands resolution.

  5. 5

    The Systemic Loophole

    Zoom out from the individual case to explain the underlying rule, flaw, or broken process that allows the problem to exist and be exploited on a large scale.

  6. 6

    The Predator's Introduction

    Introduce the specific antagonists or entities that actively exploit the systemic loophole for their own gain.

  7. 7

    The Tangible Proof

    Provide concrete data, shocking numbers, or specific financial details that quantify the harm and make the abstract exploitation feel real and undeniable.

  8. 8

    The Institutional Failure

    Escalate the blame to the highest level, accusing the governing body or institution of complicity or willful negligence in allowing the system to continue.

  9. 9

    The Celebrity Enforcer

    Reveal the involvement of a well-known or respected figure in perpetuating the problem, creating a sense of betrayal and demonstrating the depth of the corruption.

Themes

  • Exploitation
  • Corruption
  • Poverty
  • Sports Business

Techniques

  • Investigative reporting
  • Case study
  • Data presentation

Post caption

There’s an open secret in Major League Baseball: MLB teams routinely make handshake deals with young Dominican players, an informal system that has created perfect market conditions for predatory moneylenders. MLB signs more international players from the Dominican Republic than any other country. Despite widespread acknowledgement that Dominican baseball needs to be overhauled, the industry has only gotten worse. Watch ProPublica reporter Gus Garcia-Roberts break down his investigation into early agreements and the dangerous industry that has grown around them. Photography by Christopher Gregory-Rivera for ProPublica

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    This is the dirty truth

  • title · beginning

    This is the dirty truth of how Major League Baseball recruits young players from the Dominican Republic.

  • contextual · beginning

    Gus Garcia-Roberts Reporter, ProPublica

  • contextual · beginning

    Juan Soto!

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    Ortiz into deep right field ...

  • contextual · beginning

    Belfi Rivera

  • informational · beginning

    starting at age 7.

  • contextual · beginning

    Belfi Rivera, OF-Class 2023 6 August 2021 Tryout Highlights

  • contextual · beginning

    John Carmona Belfi's trainer

  • informational · beginning

    pay him $1.8 million

  • informational · middle

    Who is eligible? ...must turn 16 before he signs...

  • contextual · middle

    Santo Caraballo Lent money to Rivera family

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    $25,000 for $180,000

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    $70,000 at 7% monthly interest, 84% ANNUAL INTEREST

  • informational · middle

    From Belfi's $1.8 million contract, his trainer John Carmona received $630,000 — his 35% commission. Belfi's family said more than $950,000 went to Santo Caraballo.

  • informational · end

    Tenemos que empezar esa campaña fuerte de no al draft. We need to launch a strong "no to the draft" campaign.

  • informational · end

    The day after Ortiz sent this, the league and Players' union agreed to shelve the idea of an international draft and settled the contract.

  • call-to-action · end

    PROPUBLICA The Dominican Baseball Factory Read the full story at the link in bio.

  • informational · end

    The Diamondbacks did not respond to a request for comment. In a brief conversation, Caraballo said that his business was not "that lucrative." He added that the risk in loaning money to families is that "you never know if it will succeed or not because if the player doesn't get signed, you don't get paid." ProPublica made further attempts to contact Caraballo, including sending him a summary of our findings. He never responded.

  • informational · end

    In a statement, Ortiz said his position regarding the international draft "was based on my views regarding the development of Dominican players and the impact I believed such a system would have on baseball in our country." He also said he was never aware that Caraballo "operated an investment fund through which money belonging to players was allegedly taken or used for investment purposes." Ortiz said that he ended his personal relationship with Caraballo "a year and a half to two years ago" after "noticing conduct by Mr. Caraballo that I considered inappropriate. I started distancing myself from him personally and placed the relevant matters in the hands of my legal advisors." The players' union declined to comment on Ortiz's voice note.

Transcript

This is the dirty truth of how Major League Baseball recruits young players from the Dominican Republic. Playing American baseball has become the Dominican dream. Juan So to. Ortiz into deep right field. Back I spoke to one player named Better Rivera. Belfi had been scouted starting at age seven. By age 10, he was sent to live at a training academy. When he was 14, the Arizona Diamondbacks made an agreement with his trainer in which they would pay him $1,800,000 once he was legally of age to be signed. He walked out of the bank with almost nothing. Teams cannot sign international players until after their sixteenth birthday. Teams routinely flout that rule by making early agreements with the trainers for players as young as 13, 14, even 12 or 11. This informal system has created perfect market conditions for high interest lenders. Impoverished families of these ballplayers learn that their son is gonna be paid a bonus by a Major League Baseball tier. But at the moment they learn that, they haven't received any money. And so these high interest lenders step in offering predatory terms to these families who, for the most part, have no financial experience and are sometimes illiterate. Belfi's family borrowed money from a man named Santo Catabayo, one of the most notorious lenders in Dominican baseball. They said Katabayo offered to buy 10% of Belfi's future signing bonus. In return, he would give them roughly 25,000 upfront, dollars 25,000 for $180,000 that they would owe when Belfi got paid. They then made another deal. His family said Katabayo was gonna loan them $70,000 at 7% monthly interest, which in The United States and many other countries would be illegal. Major League Baseball has taken no steps to curb early agreements. Instead, they say that the only thing that can fix it is an international draft system. Baseball legend David Ortiz, who is business partners with Santo Caraballo, has used his influence to block reform. In 2022, Major League Baseball was pushing hard for the international draft and contract negotiations with the union. Ortiz sent a voice note to players within the union. I'm someone who's covered baseball professionally. I'm also a baseball fan. It was disheartening to see this exploitation of younger players with the implicit okay of Major League Baseball.

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