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@philybowden Rating the things I did in my NYC marathon block, trigger warning for toenail content! 🫣 If 90% of these sound really quite positive that’s because they should. This block has been SO steady and I’ve had SO much fun buying into the process, there really hasn’t been much to complain about. GRATEFUL and ready to rip on Sunday 🥹

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Runner rates her marathon training experiencesfrom @philybowden

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Overview

This is a 16-slide Instagram carousel where a female runner documents and rates various experiences from her training block for the NYC marathon. Each slide features a photo with a text overlay describing an event—from getting a toenail removed and testing new gear to traveling and spending time with friends—and gives it a numerical rating, creating a personal and engaging narrative of her journey to the race.

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Simple outline

  1. 1Hook with a 'Rating' premise
  2. 2Open with a dramatic setback-to-redemption arc
  3. 3Cycle through achievements, struggles, and reflections
  4. 4Conclude with the ultimate emotional high point

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Related videos

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Classification

Format
Concepts
Journey DocumentationLifestyle Carousel
Elements
Text OverlayB&W CutawayConsistent Visual Theme

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 45%

Rating things I did whilst training for the NYC marathon

Verbal hook · 45%

Rating the things I did in my NYC marathon block, trigger warning for toenail content! 🫣

Visual hook · 10%

The first image is a dynamic, mid-action shot of a focused female athlete running. The strong composition, athletic physique, and professional gear immediately establish the theme and capture the attention of a fitness-oriented audience.

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Hook template

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Rating things I did whilst [training for / doing a big goal or challenge]

  • — Rating things I did whilst training for the NYC marathon
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  • — Rating things I did whilst launching my Etsy shop

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

Slide 1: The Premise & Intrigue Hook. Establishes the 'Rating X' format and uses a curiosity-driving subtitle ('some of them might surprise you...') to encourage the first swipe.

Payoff

The final slide delivers the ultimate emotional peak, reinforcing the most important takeaway of the entire journey and ending the carousel on a memorable high.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Rated Journey

A listicle framework that uses a numerical rating system to chronicle the highs, lows, and surprising moments of a long-term project or experience. The sequence is curated to create an emotional arc, moving from a dramatic setback to an emotional climax, making the list feel like a compelling story.

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    The Setback & Redemption Arc

    Slides 2-3: Begins with a significant, relatable problem that initially seems disastrous (low score), then reveals its positive resolution or lesson learned in a subsequent slide (higher score). This establishes narrative tension and payoff early on.

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    The Emotional Rollercoaster Sequence

    Slides 4-15: A curated series of rated items that alternate between Peak Moments (aspirational achievements), Relatable Grinds (unglamorous struggles), Vulnerable Insights (fear, gratitude), Life-Balance Highlights (prioritizing life outside the goal), and Quirky Surprises (random, delightful moments).

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    The Summit Payoff

    Slide 16: The final item, given an exaggeratedly high score (e.g., 100/10), is dedicated to the most important emotional element of the journey (e.g., a key person, a core value), providing a powerful, heartfelt conclusion.

Themes

  • Perseverance
  • Community
  • Balance
  • Vulnerability
  • Gratitude

Techniques

  • Photojournalism
  • Text Overlay
  • Candid Photography
  • Selective Color (B&W)

Trends

  • Rating Things
  • Photo Dump
  • Day in the Life

Post caption

Rating the things I did in my NYC marathon block, trigger warning for toenail content! 🫣 If 90% of these sound really quite positive that’s because they should. This block has been SO steady and I’ve had SO much fun buying into the process, there really hasn’t been much to complain about. GRATEFUL and ready to rip on Sunday 🥹

Text overlays

  • title · photo_0

    Rating things I did whilst training for the NYC marathon

  • contextual · photo_0

    some of them might surprise you...

  • title · photo_1

    kicking things off with a bang getting my toenail removed 3 weeks out from the race

  • informational · photo_1

    1/10 at first • thought I'd thrown my marathon down the drain • couldn't walk for a day because my whole foot was numb

  • title · photo_2

    getting my toenail removed 3 weeks out from the race

  • contextual · photo_2

    shoutout to the sunroof shoe adaptation that got me through the first few runs

  • informational · photo_2

    8/10 2 days later I realised it was the best decision I'd made and I no longer had a painful black toenail rubbing on my shoes still looks horrendous

  • title · photo_3

    Racing (and winning) the absolute party of a race that was SeaWheeze

  • informational · photo_3

    10/10 never seen so many people smiling ear to ear whilst running a half marathon this race reminded me why I LOVE racing after a long time away from it <3

  • title · photo_4

    Kicking the training block off with a holiday in Canada

  • informational · photo_4

    8/10 great memories made tricky to balance: training/touristing/worrying about doing 'too much' vs not making the most of it

  • title · photo_5

    Spending 8.5 weeks of it in Flagstaff (with THE best running community)

  • informational · photo_5

    11/10 no notes I love this place and these people so much

  • title · photo_6

    Continuously getting chafe from my heart rate monitor and being left with scars from it

  • informational · photo_6

    3/10 the HR data isn't worth the scabby underboob

  • title · photo_7

    Reminding myself almost daily that this time last year I wasn't going to make it to the start line

  • informational · photo_7

    7/10 I was grateful the whole time that I get to do this but I also worried that I'd get injured any minute

  • title · photo_8

    taking the time to dial in my fuelling strategy and test out differnt carbs g/ph and caffeine usage

  • informational · photo_8

    7/10 I now have a bulletproof fuelling plan trial and error is all fun and games till you're pooping 4 times on a long run

  • title · photo_9

    Taking a detour to Dublin the week before the race to see one of my best friends marry the love of her life

  • informational · photo_9

    11/10 hands down memories that will last a lifetime, would do the double long haul travel 10 times over again some things are bigger than running

  • title · photo_10

    Testing out my very own race day speedsuit

  • informational · photo_10

    10/10 felt like a superhero... watch this space for what I'm wearing on Sunday!

  • contextual · photo_10

    Phily, Here is the prototype of your speedsuit. Give it a try and let us know your feedback. We hope you love it! - your friends at lululemon

  • title · photo_11

    Maing a conscious effort to take time to switch off from running and do some fun things

  • informational · photo_11

    20/10 balance good for the brain good for the soul + grateful for friends who understand when you need to take a nap afterwards

  • title · photo_12

    being really quite a consistent queen with the little bodywork things

  • informational · photo_12

    • non-negotiable pre-run activations • 2 x gym sessions per week • some pilates sprinkled ontop for good measure

  • informational · photo_12

    8/10 reaped the benefits HATED having to drag myself out to the gym approximately 50% of the time

  • title · photo_13

    getting to meet TWO tortoises

  • informational · photo_13

    10/10 no context needed here

  • title · photo_14

    sharing most of the miles with friends

  • informational · photo_14

    another 10/10 many deep and silly chats were had + you get 100% more out of yourself with a friend working by your side

  • title · photo_15

    Getting to do it all with my ride or die by my side

  • informational · photo_15

    100/10 couldn't and wouldn't want to do it without him

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