@isaacrochell
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@isaacrochell Proud of the journey 🫶🏽
@isaacrochell
Instagram · Carousel
@isaacrochell Proud of the journey 🫶🏽
Performance
Video #48312 · Carousel
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This carousel post tells the story of a new mother's journey to running a marathon. It uses a combination of personal photos and screenshots of text messages to chronologically document the struggles of postpartum life, the exhaustion of training, and the ultimate triumph of finishing the race with her family's support.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 50%
It was never about the marathon. It was about everything it took to get there.
Verbal hook · 45%
It was never about the marathon. It was about everything it took to get there.
Visual hook · 5%
The opening image features a powerful, intimate, and emotional moment of a family embracing on a city street. The raw emotion and human connection immediately capture attention and establish the post's heartfelt tone.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Slide 1 uses a powerful, thematic statement overlaid on an image of the final, emotional payoff. This creates an immediate emotional connection and frames the narrative as a story about the process, not just the outcome.
Payoff
The final slides deliver the emotional payoff by visually celebrating the achievement and the support system, bringing the story full circle and reinforcing the opening thesis that the journey was the most important part.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Journey Over Destination Framework
This framework hooks the audience by showing the emotional peak (the result) and stating a thematic thesis about the journey. It then rewinds to the beginning, proves the immense struggle using raw, authentic 'receipts' (like screenshots), and culminates in the triumphant payoff, reinforcing the initial thesis.
The Origin Point
Slide 2 establishes the 'before' state or the inciting incident that begins the journey. It's a dated, specific moment that grounds the narrative.
The Struggle Montage (Receipts)
Slides 3-5 present a chronological sequence of raw, unpolished evidence (e.g., text message screenshots) that documents the hardship, exhaustion, and challenges faced. This builds empathy and validates the difficulty of the journey.
The Voice of Affirmation
Slide 6 introduces a moment of external support or internal resolve, often through a quote or message. It acts as a narrative pivot, shifting the tone from struggle towards perseverance.
The Triumphant Result
Slide 7 presents the 'after' photo—the visual proof of success and the culmination of the journey, often dated to mark the achievement.
The Victory Lap
Slides 8-10 provide a montage of candid, supporting visuals from the final event. They add color, context, and emotional depth to the achievement, often highlighting the support system that made it possible.
Proud of the journey 🫶🏽
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It was never about the marathon. It was about everything it took to get there.
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4/13/26
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5-28-26
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But I'm running on no sleep, breastfeeding all the time, constantly worrying if she's eating enough, thinking about the next time she's gonna sleep and how she's gonna fall asleep, and handling almost all of the newborn's needs. When I'm exhausted and overwhelmed, I'm not showing up super patient and loving.
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6/1/26-10/15/26
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I'm genuinely so exhausted I can't even do anything I'm so fucking exhausted Have not slept ONE FUCKING NIGHT I'm so exhausted dude Fucking horrible night of sleepy I'm so fucking exhausted I was up for an hour with the baby last night. Sleep score 51 Not cool Isaac I haven't slept the last 2 nights and now how do you think I'm going to sleep
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10/22/26
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I didn't get time to shower today, I didn't get time to train for this marathon today, I barely got time to film an ad that was due 2 days ago. Im fucking ugly, [redacted], I haven't even had time to get my nails done in 5 months. Yc[redacted]
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11/1/26
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I'm so proud of you...the girls are going to need this story at some point.
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11/1/26