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@brysondechambeau
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@brysondechambeau Did we do good?
Performance
Video #6634 · Vlog
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The creator teams up with World Long Drive Champion Martin Borgmeier for an alternate shot golf challenge on a par-5 hole. Borgmeier hits a massive drive, the creator follows with a close approach shot, Borgmeier misses the eagle putt, and the creator sinks the birdie putt to finish the hole.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
Martin Borgmeier 2022 World Long Drive Champion
Verbal hook · 40%
Alternate shot with one of the longest drivers in the entire world.
Visual hook · 15%
A selfie-style shot of two men on a golf course, one of whom is a very large and muscular athlete, creating immediate visual interest and curiosity about his skill.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
The protagonist introduces a highly skilled specialist and a collaborative challenge, immediately establishing high stakes and viewer curiosity about the expert's performance.
Payoff
The Collaborative Recovery. The protagonist steps in to 'clean up' the minor failure, securing a successful, albeit not perfect, resolution to the challenge, reinforcing the theme of teamwork and ending on a positive note.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Expert Collaboration
A protagonist teams up with a world-class expert to complete a multi-stage challenge. The narrative follows their collaborative, step-by-step attempt, building tension towards a final, high-stakes action that results in a slightly imperfect but satisfying conclusion.
The Expert's Showcase
The specialist flawlessly executes their signature skill, validating their reputation and successfully completing the first stage of the challenge.
The Protagonist's Contribution
The protagonist takes the result of the expert's action and performs the next necessary step, effectively setting up the final, high-stakes moment for the team.
The Climax Subversion
The expert attempts the final, decisive action to achieve the ultimate goal but narrowly fails, subverting the expectation of a perfect outcome and introducing a moment of relatable imperfection.
Did we do good?
contextual · beginning
Martin Borgmeier 2022 World Long Drive Champion
informational · beginning
HOLE 1 530yds
informational · middle
HOLE 1 48yds
informational · middle
HOLE 1 FOR EAGLE
Alternate shot with one of the longest drivers in the entire world. For the first time ever, I'm not hitting driver. He is. It's perfect. Right down the middle. Come on, Bryson. Set me up nice for eagle. Let's go. I got you. That's pretty makeable. You got it. Yeah. Armard, knock it in.