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@brysondechambeau I’m firing my camera man after that comment
@brysondechambeau
Instagram · Vlog
@brysondechambeau I’m firing my camera man after that comment
Performance
Video #9228 · Vlog
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The creator introduces the video as Day 11 of his challenge to make a hole-in-one over his house, stating he gets 11 shots. He then proceeds to take all 11 shots, with each attempt shown in a montage format, cutting between his swing and the ball landing near the hole. After failing on the final shot, he expresses extreme frustration, which is amplified when his cameraman makes a lighthearted comment.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Verbal hook · 55%
This is day 11. I'm trying to make a hole in one over my house.
Visual hook · 45%
A man stands in the expansive driveway of a large, modern, glass-walled house holding a golf club, establishing an unusual and high-stakes setting for a golf challenge.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A clear statement of a highly difficult, self-imposed challenge with specific, limited parameters (e.g., 'Day X, X attempts').
Payoff
The creator rejects the alternative perspective offered in the previous beat, reinforcing their singular focus on the original, unachieved goal. This serves as a cliffhanger, confirming the challenge is not over and promising future attempts.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Unresolved Challenge Loop
To create viewer investment by repeatedly demonstrating high skill that results in near-success, but ultimately denying the final payoff to encourage return viewing. The narrative is driven by the tension between the creator's skill and the frustratingly elusive goal.
The Rule Declaration
The creator explicitly states the goal, the context (e.g., which attempt number this is in a series), and the constraints for the current session.
The Near-Miss Gauntlet
A rapid succession of attempts at the challenge. Each attempt is presented as a separate 'item' in the list, and every one comes extremely close to success but ultimately fails, establishing a pattern of high competence yet frustrating results.
The Frustration Climax
After the final failed attempt, the creator displays a peak moment of frustration, either verbally or physically, encapsulating the emotional toll of the repeated near-misses.
The Comedic Deflation
An external voice (like a cameraman or friend) offers an unhelpful or tone-deaf comment that humorously misunderstands the creator's frustration or the point of the challenge.
I’m firing my camera man after that comment
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Shot 11
Is day 11. I'm trying to make a whole one over my worse. Since it's day 11, I get 11 shots. Oh, that's really good. That's right on the line. Just do it. Just do it. Oh, baby. Go in. Oh my gosh. Eight inches left, man. That was dead on, dude. That's another good one. Go in. Best right. That's three. That's three in a row. Get in. Go in. Just go in, please. Oh my gosh. Go. Go. Go. Bounce off the slope. Come back in. Go in. Go in, please. It's so good. Rolling? Oh, please. That's in the hole. Oh, that looks good. Oh, why did it die? There it is. Bounce left. That's in the hole. How many more days am I gonna have to do this? Why? Just just go in. Well, at least you could have made some birdies. That's not the goal.