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@shamelesspodcast “That’s the best story I’ve ever heard” - Annabelle ‘Billy’ Lee
@shamelesspodcast
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@shamelesspodcast “That’s the best story I’ve ever heard” - Annabelle ‘Billy’ Lee
Performance
Video #12048 · Clip
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A man shares the story of the electric shock he felt when he first had sex with his partner, and then tells the story of how his grandparents met and fell in love, which also involved an electric shock. The other people on the podcast react to the stories.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
“That’s the best story I’ve ever heard” - Annabelle ‘Billy’ Lee
Verbal hook · 40%
When we first had sex, it was like this electric shock within my body.
Visual hook · 5%
Close-up shot of a man speaking into a microphone with a smile.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Start with a bold, slightly shocking personal statement to grab attention.
Payoff
Connect the family story back to the initial personal experience, creating a sense of validation and magic.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Electric Connection
A personal anecdote is used to illustrate a belief in a magical connection.
The Electric Revelation
Introduce a personal experience that seems extraordinary.
The Lame Disclaimer
Acknowledge the potential for the story to sound unbelievable or silly.
The Whispered Question
Heighten the mystery and intimacy of the experience.
The Grandmother's Tale
Transition to a related family story that reinforces the theme.
The Flatmate Introduction
Set the scene and introduce the key characters in the family story.
The Newspaper Revelation
Describe the grandfather's habits and the grandmother's attraction.
The Car Ride Proposal
Escalate the tension with a surprising proposal.
The Electric Touch
Introduce a magical element that confirms the connection.
“That’s the best story I’ve ever heard” - Annabelle ‘Billy’ Lee
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When we first had sex it was like this electric shock within my body.
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I don't sound so lame and I went to her whispered her.
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Did you feel that?
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I felt this like connection because I'm not kidding you.
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Just a quick back story.
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My grandmother right?
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She was a fierce woman.
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She's called Ruth.
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She was a freaking legend.
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She was my mom's mom.
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He was called J and she was dating James my grandfather's flatmate and she
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his hands Sophie also loves my hands really weird she always sees hands and
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then one night the flatmate said to James my grandfather can you take Ruth home
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home and he put down newspaper said okay fine and he got her into the car
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and they drove home and they chatted the whole way home and he got out the
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car at the end and opened the door and said Ruth you're home now you need
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out the car.
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My grandmother said I'm not going.
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I'm enjoying this conversation too much
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and he said no you gotta get out.
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You're home.
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She said I'm not going and he said if you get out of the car I'll marry
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you and she said you'll regret that in the morning and she touched his hand
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and she felt an electric shock.
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The next morning he phoned her up and said I don't regret it and they got
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No way.
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It's insane and my grandmother said to me whenever you find someone who
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gives you an electric shock stay with them
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and I felt it was Sophie.
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That's magical.
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Isn't that insane?
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That's a best story I've ever in my life.
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Insane.
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I'm obsessed with that.
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And I was like that's why I was like did you feel that?
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And she's like no did she?
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But I did doesn't count.
When we first had sex, it was like this electric shock within my body. I don't know how to say it. It sounds so lame. And I went to her, whispered to her, did you feel that? I felt this, like, connection because I'm not giving you just a quick backstory. My grandmother, right, she was a fierce swimmer. She called Ruth. She was a freaking legend. She was my mom's mom. Anyway, she told me this story when she first met my grandpa. No worse of a lie. Okay? They were married for tier last something like sixty, seventy years. I'm crazy. He's called James and, she was dating James, my grandfather's flatmate. And she would go to the flat the entire time and then leave and she'd always see my grandfather in the corner reading newspaper doing the crosswords. She'd love his hands. Sophie also loves my hands. Really weird. It's quite a bit to always see his hands. And then one night, the flatmate said to James, my grandfather, can you take Ruth home? And he put down newspaper rank said, okay. Fine. And he got her into the car. And they drove home rank they chatted the whole way home. And he got out the car at the end and opened the door and said, Ruth, you're home now. You need to get out tier car. And my grandmother said, I'm not going. I'm enjoying this conversation too much. And he said, me, you gotta get out. You're home. She said, I'm not going. And he said, if you get out of the car, I'll marry you. And she said, you'll regret that in the morning. And she touched his rank, and she felt an electric shock. The next morning, he phoned her up and said, I don't regret it, and they got married. No way. It's insane. And my grandmother said to me, whenever you find someone who gives you an electric shock, stay with them. And I felt it with Sophie. That's magical. That's the best. Isn't that insane? That's the best I've ever had in my life. Insane. I'm obsessed with that. And I was like that's why I was like, did you feel that? And she was like, no. Did you feel that? No. But I did, so it doesn't count.