@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Greenscreen Talking Head
@shaneohgolfs I just really do not understand… how do we solve this??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Greenscreen Talking Head
@shaneohgolfs I just really do not understand… how do we solve this??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
Performance
Video #14990 · Greenscreen Talking Head
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The creator delivers an impassioned monologue over a video of a young golfer damaging a green. He argues against gatekeeping but for bringing respect back to golf, criticizing the behavior, the parents who enable it, and the social media trend of damaging courses for views. He concludes by suggesting the game should be made inaccessible to disrespectful players and asks his audience for their opinions on solutions and for information about the course shown.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 60%
Banned from golf FOREVER????
Verbal hook · 35%
Shrink the game.
Visual hook · 5%
A split-screen view with the creator in a close-up shot in the foreground, speaking directly to the camera, while a video of a golfer plays in the background.
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Steal this for your own video
Banned from FOREVER for ????
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A bold, contrarian statement that challenges a common community belief (e.g., 'growth is always good'), paired with visual evidence of a problem and a provocative text overlay.
Payoff
Circles back to the initial controversial thesis, but now presents it as the logical, necessary, and justified solution to the problems laid out, followed by a direct call to action that empowers the audience by asking for their solutions, opinions, and information, turning the comment section into a town hall.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Community Guardian
The creator acts as a guardian of a community's values by identifying a threat, rallying the in-group against it, and proposing a controversial solution to purify the community, culminating in a call for audience participation.
The Provocative Thesis
Opens with a short, sharp, controversial statement that functions as the video's title and core argument, immediately establishing a strong point of view.
The Exhibit of Transgression
Presents clear, unambiguous visual evidence of someone violating a core community norm or value, providing the factual basis for the argument.
The Moral Reframe
Anticipates the most common criticism (e.g., 'you're gatekeeping') and reframes the creator's motive as a noble one (e.g., 'I'm trying to restore respect'), seizing the moral high ground.
The Enabler Takedown
Identifies a third party who enables the bad behavior (e.g., parents, platforms) and preemptively dismantles their likely excuses, expanding the circle of blame.
The Core Value Defense
Explains how the transgression threatens a fundamental, positive aspect of the community that the audience holds dear (e.g., accessibility, tradition), framing the issue as an existential threat.
The Root Cause Diagnosis
Pinpoints the modern-day motivation behind the transgression, often linking it to a broader negative cultural trend (e.g., clout-chasing, social media challenges).
The Contagion Warning
Illustrates how this single act is not an isolated incident but a symptom of a spreading problem that will worsen if unchecked, creating a sense of urgency.
The Institutional Blame Shift
Broadens the scope of the problem by accusing the system or authority figures of failing to enforce the rules, making them complicit and validating the community's frustration.
I just really do not understand… how do we solve this??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
title · throughout
Banned from golf FOREVER????
Shrink the game. Another video of a kid acting like an absolute idiot. Stop trying to gatekeep the game. Just stop. We're trying to bring respect back to the game because kids like this obviously don't have any. And no matter what he does, his daddy is gonna have his bad. And it's not that big of a deal. It's just a little divot on the green. You're the issue. You are the issue. Just go join a private country club, brother. Don't you think that if everybody had the money to do that, they would? That's what makes golf so special. It's accessible to everybody. But we've got kids like this taking divots out of the green to go viral on social media. And then Timmy, Jimmy, and Brad see it, and they wanna do the same thing. Public golf has become so saturated with zero respect, and it's not getting better anytime soon. And don't get it twisted. The public golf courses out there that charge an astronomical amount of money and don't have a marshal riding around, they're a part of the problem too. And I hate to say this, but it it might be time to shrink the game. Keep the game growing for the kids, but for guys like this, make the game impossible to play. So if you agree with me and you like golf content like this, make sure you're following. But I wanna know how you think we can solve this and what the punishment for stuff like this should be. Oh, and also, if you know what course this is or have any information, please let me know.