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@shaneohgolfs What is your BIGGEST pet peeve on the golf course??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp

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Length · 27 Feb 2026
1:04

Video #19368 · Greenscreen Talking Head

Greenscreen list of golf pet peevesfrom @shaneohgolfs

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Overview

The creator uses a green screen format to list the top five golf pet peeves that ruin a round. He sequentially critiques behaviors like grumpy pro shop staff, partners not watching shots, failing to fill divots, unsolicited advice, and excessive phone use, concluding with a call for better etiquette.

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Simple outline

  1. 1Hook with community blame
  2. 2List specific grievances
  3. 3Roast offender behaviors
  4. 4Challenge viewers directly

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Related videos

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Classification

Concepts
Rapid Fire ListicleRelatable Skit
Elements
Image OverlayJump CutText Overlay

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 55%

GOLF HAS A PROBLEM

Verbal hook · 40%

Golf has a serious problem, and it's us.

Visual hook · 5%

Creator holding a mini microphone superimposed over an aerial view of the famous 17th hole at TPC Sawgrass.

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

The 'Internal Enemy' Declaration: A provocative statement that blames the community itself for a problem, instantly triggering defensiveness and curiosity.

Payoff

The Direct Confrontation: A closing challenge that turns the passive viewing experience into an active self-reflection, encouraging engagement through 'personal attacks'.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Relatable Rant Listicle

A cathartic enumeration of shared community frustrations, voicing the aggressive internal monologue that the audience feels but rarely speaks.

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    The Premise Pivot

    Quickly transitions from the serious hook to the structured list format, setting expectations for a 'Top X' countdown.

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    Grievance 1: The Service Friction

    Validates a common external annoyance (staff/service) to build initial rapport with the audience.

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    Grievance 2: The Social Betrayal

    Escalates to interpersonal failures within the peer group, targeting selfish behavior.

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    Grievance 3: The Etiquette Violation

    Highlights a laziness/respect issue, using hyperbole ('should be illegal') to emphasize the severity.

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    Grievance 4: The Ego Clash

    Attacks unsolicited advice, using self-deprecation or rank comparison to dismiss the offender's authority.

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    Grievance 5: The Presence Breach

    The final, most judgmental point targeting modern distractions, delivering a harsh ultimatum.

Themes

  • Etiquette
  • Behavior
  • Community improvement

Techniques

  • Green screen
  • List format
  • Prop microphone

Trends

  • Pet peeves list
  • Greenscreen commentary

Post caption

What is your BIGGEST pet peeve on the golf course??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    GOLF HAS A PROBLEM

  • title · beginning

    TOP 5 GOLF PET PEEVES

  • informational · middle

    1. Grumpy Pro Shop Guy

  • informational · middle

    2. Doesn't watch your shot

  • informational · middle

    3. NOT FILLING DIVOTS

  • informational · middle

    4. UNSOLICITED SWING ADVICE

  • informational · end

    5. Phone Addict

  • call-to-action · end

    WE ALL HAVE TO BE BETTER

Transcript

Golf has a serious problem, and it's us. So here are the top five golf pet peeves that ruin every single round. Number one, and we have all experienced this. The guy in the pro shop being upset that we showed up for our tee time that we booked and we paid for. Sorry. We ruined your day at work. Number two, when somebody you are playing with does not watch your drive, they hit theirs and immediately start walking back to the car. I just watched you slice your drive a 150 yards into the woods no I could help you find it. Be a half decent human being and watch mine too. Number three, not filling your divots. It should be illegal. It takes three seconds. You are already going to shoot a 94. Don't make the worse suffer too. Number four, and this might be the worst one, unsolicited swing advice. If I wanted swing advice from a 27 handicap, I would have asked. And number five, people on their phones the entire round. Why are you even here? Put your phone away. It's four hours. If you can't do that, don't come play. So if you felt personally attacked by any of these, good. Fix it before your next tier time.

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