@wacomo
Instagram · Vlog
@wacomo i started writing this video over a year ago and guess what happened
@wacomo
Instagram · Vlog
@wacomo i started writing this video over a year ago and guess what happened
Performance
Video #16765 · Vlog
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The creator humorously confesses his growing problem with procrastination by giving a tour of his home, showcasing evidence like a shelf he built to avoid taxes, bags of clothes he hasn't donated, and a pipe wrench used as a shower handle. He then reveals the ultimate symbol of his procrastination—his Spanish passport that expired five years ago—and makes the video as a public commitment to finally renew it, asking his audience for accountability.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
the more i grow up
Verbal hook · 50%
The more I grow up, the better I seem to be getting at procrastinating.
Visual hook · 5%
A high-angle, wide-angle shot looking down at the creator, creating an unusual and distorted perspective that breaks visual monotony.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A direct-to-camera declaration of a common, relatable personal flaw, framed as a skill that is improving with age.
Payoff
A declaration that this piece of content is a public act of accountability designed to force action. It concludes by turning the personal struggle into a universal call to action for the audience, making them a part of the solution.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Escalating Evidence Confessional
To prove a relatable personal flaw by presenting a series of increasingly absurd or significant examples, culminating in a 'final boss' example that becomes the focus, leading to a public commitment to change.
The Evidence Premise
States that the environment is filled with proof of the flaw, setting up a 'show, don't tell' list format.
Exhibit A: The Productive Diversion
Presents the first, most benign piece of evidence, where the flaw manifests as a distracting but useful activity.
Exhibit B: The Lingering Task
Presents a second, more common example of simple negligence, increasing relatability.
Exhibit C: The Absurd Workaround
Escalates the stakes by showing a comical and illogical solution born from the flaw, demonstrating its real-world impact.
The Ultimate Reveal
Pivots from the general list to introduce a single, ultimate embodiment of the flaw, framing it as the most significant example.
The Backstory & Stakes
Provides context for the ultimate example, explaining its personal importance and revealing the shocking scale or duration of the problem.
The Cycle of Failure
Details the repetitive, failed attempts to address the core problem, building empathy and highlighting the psychological trap of the flaw.
i started writing this video over a year ago and guess what happened
contextual · beginning
the more i grow up the better i seem to be getting at procrastinating
contextual · beginning
of evidence of my procrastinative activities
contextual · beginning
is a shelf that i built for my kettle because i didn't want to do my taxes
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three bags of clothes that i've wanted to donate since 2023
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which looks like a pipe wrench is actually my shower handle
title · middle
my spanish passport
informational · middle
because it expired 5 YEARS AGO
contextual · middle
every week my mom tells me to "renew your passport"
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every week i put it on my to do list and every week i don't do it
call-to-action · end
as my final attempt at renewing my passport cus you guys will hold me accountable
call-to-action · end
can also be a reminder to do whatever you've been procrastinating
The more I grow up, the better I seem to be getting at procrastinating. My house is full of evidence of my procrastinative activities. This, for example, is a shop that I best for my kettle because I didn't want to do my taxes. And these are three bags of clothes that I've wanted to donate since 2023, but I haven't really had the time to do so. Or this, which looks like a pipe wrench, is actually my shower handle. Oh, it works like this. Better there is only one object in my house that truly embodies my issues with procrastination, my Spanish passport. You see, my mom is Spanish, and so I have a Spanish passport. But as you might be able to tell, I look like an actual toddler in this picture because it expired five years ago. Every week, my mom tells me to renew your passport. Every week, I tell her yes, of course. Every week, I put it on my to do best, and every week, I don't do it. So I've decided to make this video as my final attempt at renewing my passport because you guys will hold me accountable. And maybe this video can also be a reminder to do whatever you've been procrastinating.