@jennaphipps
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@jennaphipps I kinda love the shower so far 🥲
@jennaphipps
Instagram · Vlog
@jennaphipps I kinda love the shower so far 🥲
Performance
Video #16805 · Vlog
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The creator provides a progress update on their bathroom renovation. She shows professional installers finishing the installation of a large marble slab and a custom shelf, explaining why they chose a shelf over a niche. The video then transitions to her and her partner's DIY project of tiling the rest of the shower, shown through a timelapse, highlighting the difficulty and time-consuming nature of the task. She concludes by revealing they ran out of tiles and are now waiting for more to arrive, leaving the project unfinished.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Verbal hook · 35%
So last week, we got the large marble slab installed in our shower.
Visual hook · 65%
Three workers are shown actively pushing a large, heavy, patterned marble slab against a wall, creating immediate visual interest through action and scale.
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Open on maneuvering an oversized into place in a , framed to emphasize its scale against the room.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A recap of a recent, significant achievement to establish context and a feeling of forward momentum.
Payoff
An unresolved cliffhanger. The narrative concludes with a statement of uncertainty about the resolution of the obstacle, compelling the audience to follow for the next update.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Progress & Setback Loop
The narrative establishes momentum by showcasing a completed milestone, then pivots to a new, more difficult challenge, building empathy through a depiction of struggle before culminating in an unexpected, project-halting setback that serves as a cliffhanger.
The Milestone Marker
Declares a key component of the project complete, providing a moment of satisfaction and setting the stage for the next phase.
The Design Justification
Provides a brief backstory for a specific choice, explaining a constraint and the resulting clever solution. This adds depth and demonstrates thoughtful execution.
The Difficulty Pivot
Introduces the next phase of the project, explicitly framing it as a new and difficult challenge, often highlighting inexperience to raise the stakes.
The Effort Montage
Visually and audibly communicates the grueling, time-consuming nature of the new task, building viewer empathy for the labor involved.
The Unforeseen Obstacle
Reveals a sudden, external problem that brings all progress to a halt, creating a moment of high frustration and conflict.
I kinda love the shower so far 🥲
So last week, we got the large marble slab installed in our shower. This week, they finally finished it. Basically, we were just missing the bottom portion of the slab and the shelf that kinda gets sandwiched in between. Originally, I really wanted a niche beside the tub, but because there was a structural post in the wall, we couldn't put a niche tier. And so the solution was the shelf. And I think it turned out pretty good. But for the rest of the shower, you're doing it in. Neither of us have done this before. And, it took us three days to do two walls. I was somewhat mentally prepared going into this that it was gonna take a while, but it just keeps going and going and going. But unfortunately, after these three days, we did end up running out of tile. We ordered enough, but not all that showed up. And so hopefully, it comes soon. I have no idea when it's coming.