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@bigjohngolfs “Feed me the pen” #fyp #golf #funny #explore #viral
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Video #17352 · Skit
Relatable golf frustration skitfrom @bigjohngolfs
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Overview
The creator portrays a golfer having a bad round in a tournament. After hitting a poor tee shot, he comically asks his caddy for a vape pen, delivers a monologue with puns about how it helps him reset, and then proceeds to hit a perfect approach shot and sink the putt, crediting the pen for his success.
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Simple outline
- 1Present relatable failure
- 2Introduce mysterious solution
- 3Justify solution with humor
- 4Demonstrate solution's success
- 5Confirm solution's power
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Classification
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Hook analysis
What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 70%
POV YOUR PLAYING BAD IN GOLF TOURNEY...
Visual hook · 30%
The video opens with the dynamic, full-body motion of a golfer taking a powerful tee shot, immediately establishing an action-oriented scene.
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Hook template
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POV: You’re playing terrible in ...
- — POV: You’re playing terrible in your club championship...
- — POV: You’re cooking terrible at the dinner party...
- — POV: You’re interviewing terrible for your dream job...
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Hook and payoff
The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A text overlay states a highly relatable problem, which is immediately confirmed by a visual demonstration of failure.
Payoff
The protagonist directly addresses the audience, reaffirming the gimmick's power with a memorable catchphrase, cementing the video's central joke.
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Narrative framework
The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Gimmick Redemption Arc
A character overcomes a common failure by employing an unconventional, humorous, or mysterious 'gimmick,' then proves its effectiveness through a successful outcome.
- 1
The Desperate Call for Aid
After failing, the protagonist requests a specific, unusual object, creating mystery and signaling a change in approach.
- 2
The Gimmick Monologue
The protagonist uses the object and delivers a monologue that humorously justifies its use, often with clever wordplay, establishing it as the central 'magic' solution.
- 3
The Moment of Truth
The protagonist attempts the initial failed task again, creating a high-stakes test of the gimmick's effectiveness.
- 4
The Successful Execution
The attempt is shown to be successful, providing initial validation for the gimmick.
- 5
The Final Triumph
A secondary action confirms the complete success and resolution of the initial problem.
Themes
Techniques
Trends
Post caption
“Feed me the pen” #fyp #golf #funny #explore #viral
Text overlays
title · beginning
POV YOUR PLAYING BAD IN GOLF TOURNEY...
Transcript
No tier Winston, give me the pen. That should be the difference right there, voice. When in doubt, shit hits the rank. Just hit the pen. Everything's alright. I think I was just freaking out. You no, you take a little pen wrap and you're just back to where you need to better Benjamin Rank, Penny Hardaway, Penn Simpson. Sit. Down. Down. Yeah. It's alright. It could work. It was always the pen. Feed me the pen.