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@shaneohgolfs What should the punishment be if these kids are caught? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
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Video #18217 · Talking Head Edit
Creator reports on golf course vandalismfrom @shaneohgolfs
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Overview
The creator reports on a recent incident of vandalism at the Boca Dunes golf course in Florida, where teenagers on e-bikes tore up several greens. He shares photos of the damage, a DM he received about the incident, and explains the financial and emotional impact on the executive course. To underscore the severity, he cites another Florida case resulting in $160,000 in damages and felony charges, warning potential vandals of the consequences before ending with a call to action for viewers to support the affected course and follow his account for accountability.
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Simple outline
- 1Present outrageous problem
- 2Provide specific evidence
- 3Escalate with bigger example
- 4Reveal severe consequences
- 5Issue call to action
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Classification
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Hook analysis
What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
Why does this keep happening???
Verbal hook · 35%
What's happening to golf courses around the world right now sucks, and this has nothing to do with shrink the game or grow the game.
Visual hook · 10%
A wide shot of a damaged golf course green with visible tire tracks serves as the background, immediately showing the problem the creator is about to discuss.
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Hook and payoff
The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Immediately state a strong, negative judgment about a problem to generate outrage and curiosity, while visually showing evidence of the problem.
Payoff
Conclude with a brand-aligned call to action that frames following the creator as joining a larger cause or movement related to the video's theme.
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Narrative framework
The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Investigative Escalation
To report on a negative event by first establishing it as a widespread problem, then focusing on a specific case study, escalating the stakes with a more severe example, and concluding with a call to action that empowers the audience.
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The Outrageous Premise
Frame a specific event as part of a larger, troubling trend. Dismiss common counterarguments to focus the narrative.
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The Specific Incident
Ground the abstract problem in a concrete, visual example. Identify the location, victims, and alleged perpetrators to make the story tangible.
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The Personal Investigation
Insert the creator into the narrative by showing they've done independent research (e.g., made a call, found a source). This builds authority and provides an exclusive emotional perspective from the victims.
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The Contextual Stakes
Explain why the transgression is particularly harmful in this specific context, adding layers of emotional weight beyond the surface-level damage.
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The Escalation & Consequence
Introduce a second, more extreme example of the same problem to prove it's not an isolated incident. Attach a severe, quantifiable consequence (financial or legal) to this second example to dramatically raise the stakes.
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The Direct Warning
Address the audience or potential perpetrators directly, translating the abstract consequences into a personal, relatable warning.
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The Community Call to Action
Shift the narrative from problem-focused to solution-oriented. Provide the audience with specific, actionable ways they can support the victim or help resolve the situation.
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Post caption
What should the punishment be if these kids are caught? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #fyp
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title · beginning
Why does this keep happening??? ⛳️
informational · middle
Hey, man. Please keep spreading the word to shrink the game. Just played a nice course in FL only for 3 of the last 5 greens to be completely destroyed by kids on electric bikes doing donuts right in front of me. Im sick to my stomach. Thank you, sir. God bless 🙏
contextual · middle
*PAUSE TO READ*
informational · middle
$160K in damage caused at Central Florida golf course; police looking for suspect
Transcript
What's happening to golf courses around the world right now sucks, and this has nothing to do with shrink the game or grow the game. All of these photos are from Boca Dunes Good Course down in Florida. Yes, before school, they fell victim to some teenagers and their e bikes. I mean, this blows my mind. But I received this DM right tier. And after reading that, I decided to call Boca Dunes Good Course myself. They are absolutely devastated. Boca Dunes is an executive golf course. If you don't know what that is, it's a shorter worse, a ton of par threes, a couple of par fours, and maybe one par five. And being that it is an executive course with a ton of par threes, they pride themselves on their greens, and some clown comes and tears up three of their greens. This is thousands of dollars worse of damage. And if you don't believe me, this just happened in Florida as well at Venetian Bay Good Worse. $160,000 worth of damage. And guess what? The kid who did it now has felony charges. So for anybody out there that was considering going to do this to a golf course, just know that the Internet is a very powerful place and having a felony in high school is not a good look. For any of you that are in the Boca area, go show some love and support to Boca Dunes. Go play their worse. Be patient with them. They are working their butt off to get back to normal. And if you have any potential leads on maybe who did this, shoot me a message. And as always, if you wanna hold people accountable for their stupid actions on the golf course, make sure you're following.