@abigailcanfieldd
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@abigailcanfieldd Replying to @Brooklyn 馃嚛馃嚧 another day trying to slay a slick back #hairstyle #slickback #hair #fail #sephora @amika @L鈥橭r茅al Paris @lor茅al paris usa
@abigailcanfieldd
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@abigailcanfieldd Replying to @Brooklyn 馃嚛馃嚧 another day trying to slay a slick back #hairstyle #slickback #hair #fail #sephora @amika @L鈥橭r茅al Paris @lor茅al paris usa
Performance
Video #18789 路 Prop Yap
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The creator begins by showing her messy hair and responding to an on-screen comment about slick back hairstyles. She decides to let Pinterest choose her hairstyle for the day, scrolling through her phone before landing on a 'slick back rope braid.' She then gathers her tools, parts her hair, complains about cowlicks, and begins the process by spraying her hair with water until it's damp, commenting on how greasy it looks. She then dispenses a hair styling cream into her hand and starts applying it to her roots, struggling with the rings on her fingers as the video ends.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook 路 55%
Trying to do a slick back rope braid?!! 馃檶馃徎馃憖 (Gone wrong)
Verbal hook 路 30%
How does one take their hair from this nest to be perfect slick back?
Visual hook 路 15%
The creator is actively messing with her disheveled, messy hair, creating a strong visual contrast to the 'perfect slick back' she mentions. An on-screen comment overlay also provides immediate context and visual interest.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Juxtapose a chaotic 'before' state with a desired 'perfect' outcome, while using an on-screen text overlay to promise failure or struggle (e.g., 'Gone wrong').
Payoff
The video concludes without resolution, confirming the promise of failure from the hook and leaving the audience in suspense, which encourages engagement and demand for a follow-up.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Relatable Failure Arc
To document an attempt to achieve a specific, difficult goal, with the explicit expectation of failure. The entertainment is derived from the relatable and humorous struggles encountered during the process, culminating in a cliffhanger that confirms the initial premise of things going wrong.
The Chaos State
Visually and verbally establish the initial problem or messy starting point, creating an immediate, relatable conflict.
The Challenge Gambit
Introduce an external, randomizing element (e.g., a platform, a poll, a third party) to define the specific task or goal for the video, adding an element of unpredictability.
The Task Reveal
Clearly present the chosen goal, emphasizing its difficulty or complexity to establish the stakes for the viewer.
The Micro-Conflict
As the process begins, immediately identify and lament a small, highly relatable initial obstacle to build empathy and humor.
The Action-Reaction Setback
Execute the first major step of the process, which results in an immediate, often comedic, negative consequence that validates the 'gone wrong' premise.
The Anecdotal Breather
Briefly pause the main action to deliver a short, personal anecdote or tangential thought that builds character and provides a momentary break in the tension.
The Escalating Obstacle
Introduce a final, more significant frustration or problem that brings the process to a halt, serving as the video's cliffhanger.
Replying to @Brooklyn 馃嚛馃嚧 another day trying to slay a slick back #hairstyle #slickback #hair #fail #sephora @amika @L鈥橭r茅al Paris @lor茅al paris usa
contextual 路 beginning
I have good slick backs without even trying
title 路 beginning
Trying to do a slick back rope braid?!! 馃檶馃徎馃憖 (Gone wrong)
How does one take their hair from this nest to be perfect slick bad? I don't really know. I don't really know. Yeah. It is clearly hair wash day. So today, I thought it'd be fun if we let Pinterest choose my hairstyle of the day. Either I'm ugly or I just need to figure out new hairstyles to do with my hair because I never changed it. No. I don't have a black eye. I was trying to do some eye shadow and it looks horrendous. A rope braid slick back ponytail. Okay. Let me go get my tools. Already doing better than last week because, I can use a a park. Rank God. Thank God. Who invented Calyx and why? So my rosary. Okay. Worst, I'm going in with my water. Damp. Okay. No you look like a wet rank. This is genuinely what my hair looks like after I don't wash it for one day. A lot of you guys are like so shocked that I was blonde. Yeah. Good. Yeah. Blonde was all I knew for like a very again, with the rank, dude. Why am I wearing rank a ling a ding dongs with my hair, like, slick back cream.