@joshuacrochets
Instagram · Story-Driven Montage
@joshuacrochets Help me make this video go viral… my son is losing motivation😔❤️🩹
@joshuacrochets
Instagram · Story-Driven Montage
@joshuacrochets Help me make this video go viral… my son is losing motivation😔❤️🩹
Performance
Video #20370 · Story-Driven Montage
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The creator starts by showing his young son looking sad alongside a homophobic hate comment criticizing the boy's crochet hobby. The video then cuts to the father reacting emotionally in his car, followed by footage of the boy diligently crocheting. Finally, it reveals the impressive, glowing crochet flower lamps the boy makes, using text overlays to ask the audience for support and validation to boost the boy's motivation.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
Reply to g_arnold742's comment little f*g*t making flowers out of yarn, you should be ashamed of yourself as a dad 😂
Verbal hook · 15%
People really be making fun of me best because I'm a boy who crochet.
Visual hook · 40%
Close-up of a young boy looking visibly sad and disheartened, paired with a highly offensive hate comment overlay to create immediate emotional shock and empathy.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Introduce a harsh, relatable conflict (unjust criticism/bullying) paired with the subject's vulnerable reaction to instantly trigger viewer empathy and protective outrage.
Payoff
The Triumphant Reveal: Showcasing the final, high-quality result of the craft, completely invalidating the initial criticism and prompting the viewer to leave positive validation in the comments.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Underdog Vindication Reveal
Leveraging outrage against an unjust criticism to build emotional investment, followed by a showcase of undeniable talent that proves the critic wrong and compels supportive engagement.
The Hater's Catalyst
Display a specific, cruel detraction (often via text overlay) while the subject expresses vulnerability, establishing the core conflict and narrative stakes.
The Guardian's Empathy
Show a supportive figure's emotional reaction to the cruelty, validating the injustice and deepening the viewer's emotional investment in the subject's success.
The Defiant Process
Showcase the subject actively working on their craft accompanied by a time-constrained retention hook (e.g., 'wait X seconds'), building anticipation for the final result.
Help me make this video go viral… my son is losing motivation😔❤️🩹
contextual · beginning
Reply to g_arnold742's comment little f*g*t making flowers out of yarn, you should be ashamed of yourself as a dad 😂
call-to-action · middle
Please stay 7 seconds to show him his art is worth it 🥺🫶🏽
call-to-action · end
Please tell me if you like his flowers or not 🥺🫶🏽
People really be making fun of me best because I'm a boy who crochet.