@bigjohngolfs
Instagram · Field Demonstration
@bigjohngolfs HOW TO HIT A DRAW ✍️ ❤️ ALL HEART. ALL FOG 🌫️
@bigjohngolfs
Instagram · Field Demonstration
@bigjohngolfs HOW TO HIT A DRAW ✍️ ❤️ ALL HEART. ALL FOG 🌫️
Performance
Video #22953 · Field Demonstration
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The creator opens by aggressively promising to teach viewers how to hit a draw in golf, using unconventional pocket items (a pen and a tin of chews) as swing path guides. He demonstrates the setup on the grass, executes the swing, and then pivots to mock viewers who might still slice the ball right. He concludes by demonstrating a 'peace sign' hand release technique and bluntly telling viewers that any remaining issues are their own fault.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 35%
HOW JOHN HITS A DRAW ⛳️✍️
Verbal hook · 50%
I'm gonna teach you dum dums how to draw.
Visual hook · 15%
The creator stands on a vibrant green golf course holding a club and golf balls, directly addressing the camera with a confident, slightly confrontational posture.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Condescending opening promising a solution.
Payoff
Blame the failure on the viewer and ask for engagement.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Satirical Tutorial
A satirical tutorial that intentionally fails and blames the viewer for comedic effect.
The Absurd Setup
Introduce ridiculous tools as legitimate solutions.
The Confident Execution
Perform the action with unearned confidence.
The Inevitable Failure
Reveal the action failed completely.
The Doubling Down
Repeat the attempt with absurd advice.
HOW TO HIT A DRAW ✍️ ❤️ ALL HEART. ALL FOG 🌫️
title · beginning
HOW JOHN HITS A DRAW ⛳️✍️
I'm gonna teach you dum dums how to draw. Take whatever you have out of your pockets. For me, it's a pen and chews. You're gonna wanna set them down. It should look something like this. Get it. This helps promote the draw path. And if you do it right, you don't hit the shit. Oh my god, John. It's still staying out to the right. It's still going right. For all you dumb dumbs, you gotta make sure. Peace. Peace. Oh, fuck. If it's going right, it's a you problem. Tier might best heart fall for more.