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@lamottagroup That smell of freshly cut grass and deep heat still gets me going!! #lamottagroup #sport #supportsmallbusiness #rugby #construction
@lamottagroup
Instagram · Skit
@lamottagroup That smell of freshly cut grass and deep heat still gets me going!! #lamottagroup #sport #supportsmallbusiness #rugby #construction
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Video #23430 · Skit
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The creators act out a relatable workplace skit where apprentices trick their boss into extending their break (smoko) by asking him about his past football glory days. The video transitions into a comedic montage of the boss enthusiastically reenacting his exaggerated rugby highlights while the apprentices relax, successfully wasting an hour of work time.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
Apprentice tips 101: How to extend smoko by 30min
Verbal hook · 25%
Yep. Aren't you playing footy this weekend?
Visual hook · 20%
Three construction workers in dark workwear sitting on buckets in a backyard setting, instantly establishing a relatable blue-collar workplace scene.
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Steal this for your own video
Apprentice tip : How to by
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A text overlay promises a relatable 'pro tip' or 'hack' to avoid an undesirable situation, immediately setting up the premise and value proposition.
Payoff
A time-jump reveals the distraction worked too well, leaving the protagonists trapped in a new, comically exhausting situation that serves as the punchline.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Ego-Bait Distraction Hack
Demonstrating a relatable 'life hack' where subordinates manipulate an authority figure's ego to avoid work, resulting in a comically exaggerated over-correction.
The Impending Deadline
An authority figure attempts to enforce a rule or end a leisure period, establishing the immediate conflict and stakes.
The Strategic Bait
The protagonist deploys a calculated, ego-stroking question designed to completely derail the authority figure's agenda.
The Hook Line and Sinker
The authority figure enthusiastically accepts the premise, completely forgetting their original directive and shifting the momentum.
The Passionate Montage
A rapid, exaggerated sequence showing the target fully engrossed in their tangent, utilizing physical comedy and hyperbole to escalate the joke.
That smell of freshly cut grass and deep heat still gets me going!! #lamottagroup #sport #supportsmallbusiness #rugby #construction
title · beginning
Apprentice tips 101: How to extend smoko by 30min
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Can you buy us some more time?
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That time I ran over the half back
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Then stepped the full back
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And scored the winning try
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I would usually go the goosey
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But fend when I felt like it
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Once I kicked the winning field goal on the buzzer
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Don't argue
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Taught SBW how to flick
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1 hour later...
Yep. Aren't you playing footy this weekend? Yeah. This Friday no. Six Alright, boys. Enough chitchat. Smoke goes over. Let's go. Hey, boss. Didn't you play footy? What was it like when you played? You know I played footy.