@zephzoid I wish this was fake but residents near Driscoll’s berry farms report a 38% higher incidence of childhood cancer.
Santa Cruz County is the heart of California’s $3B strawberry industry and home to Driscoll’s world headquarters.
Coincidentally, it also has the second-highest childhood cancer rate of any county in California.
At 22.5 childhood cancers per 100,000 children, the rate is more than 38% above the statewide average of 16.3.
Over 5,060 acres of pesticides linked to those same cancers are sprayed in the Pajaro Valley every year to grow 40% of California’s strawberries.
Worst of all, it’s often next to schools and homes where children spend most of their time.
According to the latest data, over 2,000,000 pounds of pesticides were applied just in this school district’s area alone.
Driscoll’s is reported to apply two together:
1. 1,3-D: fumigant used to sterilize the soil, officially listed by the state as a carcinogen, causes tumors in multiple animal studies
2. Chloropicrin: originally deployed as a chemical weapon in World War I, so toxic that it kills or disables test animals before scientists can even evaluate its long-term carcinogenicity
But yeah it’s probably just a coincidence all the kids are getting cancer?
This is why you need to be buying local and seasonal fruit.
Do not trust major corporations to do the right thing for our food or health.
The creator makes a case against the berry company Driscoll's by presenting a sequence of statistics, news clippings, and claims about pesticide use. He links the company's agricultural practices in Santa Cruz County to what he reports as the second-highest childhood cancer rate in California, identifies specific toxic chemicals used, and concludes by urging viewers to distrust large corporations and use an app to find local food producers.
I wish this was fake, but residents near America's most popular berry farms report a thirty eight percent higher incidence of childhood cancer.
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A split-screen image showing a smiling corporate representative holding berries on top, contrasted with a protest scene with signs about pesticides and cancer on the bottom.
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I wish this was fake but residents near Driscoll’s berry farms report a 38% higher incidence of childhood cancer.
Santa Cruz County is the heart of California’s $3B strawberry industry and home to Driscoll’s world headquarters.
Coincidentally, it also has the second-highest childhood cancer rate of any county in California.
At 22.5 childhood cancers per 100,000 children, the rate is more than 38% above the statewide average of 16.3.
Over 5,060 acres of pesticides linked to those same cancers are sprayed in the Pajaro Valley every year to grow 40% of California’s strawberries.
Worst of all, it’s often next to schools and homes where children spend most of their time.
According to the latest data, over 2,000,000 pounds of pesticides were applied just in this school district’s area alone.
Driscoll’s is reported to apply two together:
1. 1,3-D: fumigant used to sterilize the soil, officially listed by the state as a carcinogen, causes tumors in multiple animal studies
2. Chloropicrin: originally deployed as a chemical weapon in World War I, so toxic that it kills or disables test animals before scientists can even evaluate its long-term carcinogenicity
But yeah it’s probably just a coincidence all the kids are getting cancer?
This is why you need to be buying local and seasonal fruit.
Do not trust major corporations to do the right thing for our food or health.
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Driscoll's Exposed for What They Really Are
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I wish this was fake,
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residents near America's most popular berry farms report a 38% higher incidence of childhood cancer
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Santa Cruz County is the heart of California's $3 billion strawberry industry and home to Driscoll's world headquarters
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And coincidentally, it also has the second highest childhood cancer rate of any county in California
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At 22.5 childhood cancers per 100,000 children, the rate is more than 38% above the statewide average of 16
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Over 5,000 acres of pesticides linked to those same cancers are sprayed in the Pajaro Valley every year to grow 40% of California's strawberries
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And worst of all, it's often next to schools and homes where children spend most of their time
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And according to the latest data, over 2 million pounds of pesticides were applied in just this school district's area alone
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Many speculate the toxicity is so high because Driscoll's reportedly applies two different pesticides together
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And then we wonder why all the kids are getting cancer
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I used to not think twice about grocery store brands, but ever since I found local and seasonal fruit growers on Localize, I have never looked back
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Do not trust major corporations to do the right thing
Transcript
I wish this was fake, but residents near America's most popular berry farms report a thirty eight percent higher incidence of childhood cancer. Santa Cruz County is the heart of California's $3,000,000,000 strawberry industry, and home to Driscoll's worse headquarters. Rank coincidentally, it also has the second highest childhood cancer rate of any county in California. At twenty two point five childhood cancers per 100,000 children, the rate is more than thirty eight percent above the statewide average of sixteen. Over 5,000 acres of pesticides linked to those same cancers are sprayed in the Pajaro Valley every year to grow 40% of California's strawberry. And worst of all, it's often next to schools and homes where children spend most of their time, and according to the latest data, over 2,000,000 pounds of pesticides were applied in just this school district's area alone. Many speculate the toxicity is so high because Driscoll's reportedly applies two different pesticides together. One of them is officially listed by the state as a carcinogen, and the other was originally deployed as a chemical weapon in World War I, and it's so toxic that it kills or disables test animals before scientists can even test it long term. And then we wonder why all the kids are getting cancer I used to not think twice about grocery store brands Best ever since I found local and seasonal fruit growers on localized I have never looked back do not trust major corporations to do the right thing
