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@cluely Ep 23: your engineers make the sales pitch #officehumor #cluely #coworkersbelike #funnyskits #techbro
@cluely
Instagram · Skit
@cluely Ep 23: your engineers make the sales pitch #officehumor #cluely #coworkersbelike #funnyskits #techbro
Performance
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The creator performs a comedic skit where a manager preps his two socially awkward engineers for a crucial investor pitch, only to get locked in the bathroom. Left to their own devices, the engineers proceed to give a disastrously inappropriate and confusing pitch, which is then summarized with disdain by one of the investors in a testimonial-style cutaway.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 65%
POV: your autistic engineers pitch to the investors
Verbal hook · 20%
Okay. Listen, guys. This meeting is super important.
Visual hook · 15%
A man in a blazer gives urgent instructions to two other men in a modern office setting, establishing immediate narrative tension and a high-stakes scenario.
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Steal this for your own video
POV: your has to
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A 'Point of View' text overlay that establishes a relatable, high-stakes scenario with a clear expectation of comedic failure.
Payoff
A final, deadpan summary from an observer's perspective that confirms the total failure of the preceding events, providing a satisfying comedic resolution.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Inevitable Failure
A comedic structure where a character sets simple rules for a high-stakes situation, is then removed, and the remaining characters proceed to break every rule in an escalating series of failures, culminating in a final, external judgment.
The Preemptive Warning
A leader figure establishes the high stakes of an upcoming event and gives a set of simple, explicit negative commands ('Don't do X,' 'Don't do Y') to their socially inept subordinates, foreshadowing the chaos to come.
The Authority Vacuum
The leader is unexpectedly removed from the situation, creating a power vacuum and leaving the unprepared subordinates to face the high-stakes event alone.
The First Transgression
The subordinates immediately break a social norm in their first interaction, confirming the audience's expectation of failure and delivering the initial comedic payoff.
The Point of No Return
A parallel scene reveals that the leader is physically unable to return and intervene, removing any hope of a rescue and locking the characters into their disastrous course.
The Reluctant Ascension
Faced with external pressure to proceed, the subordinates reluctantly designate one among them to take the lead, heightening the sense of impending doom.
The Catastrophic Execution
The designated subordinate attempts to perform the high-stakes task but fails spectacularly, delivering a message that is not only poorly worded but also comically inappropriate or alarming.
The Post-Mortem Verdict
The narrative cuts to a final, detached perspective (like a mock interview) where an observer dryly and understatedly summarizes the subordinates' multiple failures, providing a conclusive and judgmental punchline.
Ep 23: your engineers make the sales pitch #officehumor #cluely #coworkersbelike #funnyskits #techbro
title · beginning
POV: your autistic engineers pitch to the investors
contextual · end
Rick Jones Andrequoia-Perkins Partner
Okay. Listen, guys. This meeting is super important. Okay? We need these investors. So just remember, Linglong, no smoking. And Brandon, just don't be weird. Okay? Let me do all the talking. But I take shit right now, so I'm gonna be back. Do not talk to anybody. Hey guys. Sorry we're late. But let's get started right away. Which one of you was Roy? Roy's, not in here right now. He's taking a shit. What? Hello? Hello? Someone out there? Hello? Well, we only have ten minutes. So, let's get started. Brandon, your English is better than mine. You should do the talking today. Okay. Worst of marketing is a boring and a bad, but it was a bounty. We gotta hire many 14 year old boys to make advertisements for us. I can't say we're sold on bounty yet. The Chinese gentleman keeps trying to smoke inside, and the other gentleman is, quite technical.