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@fairwayfields Just getting started Fairway Fields - Chesterville, Maine

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Length · 19 May 2026
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Video #28933 · Vlog

Abandoned golf course renovation journeyfrom @fairwayfields

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Overview

The creator provides a one-year update on the renovation of an abandoned golf course, using a voiceover to guide the viewer through before-and-after comparisons of the pro shop, driving range, and fairways, while also showing his family members working on the property.

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Simple outline

  1. 1Show initial derelict state
  2. 2Reveal dramatic facility transformation
  3. 3Showcase ongoing field work
  4. 4Acknowledge future challenges

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Related videos

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Classification

Format
Concepts
Before/After TransformationJourney DocumentationOrigin Story
Elements
Title Text HookB-Roll CutawayVoiceoverMontage Editing

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 35%

Abandoned golf course 1 year transformation

Verbal hook · 30%

Better one year exactly since we bought this old abandoned golf course.

Visual hook · 35%

First-person POV shot looking down at a golf ball and a makeshift hole in an overgrown, weedy field, immediately establishing the 'abandoned' theme.

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

An initial, shocking visual of the 'before' state that immediately establishes the scale of the challenge and the promise of a satisfying transformation.

Payoff

The payoff is a feeling of shared accomplishment and vicarious satisfaction from the progress shown, combined with a compelling reason to stay invested in the ongoing story.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Progress Report

Documenting a significant transformation over a set period by systematically comparing 'before' and 'after' states of different project components, while humanizing the effort and teasing future developments.

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    The Anniversary Declaration

    The creator appears on camera to state the time-based premise (e.g., 'It's been one year since...'), framing the video as a milestone update and personalizing the journey.

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    The Anchor Transformation

    A rapid, high-impact before-and-after comparison of a key, recognizable asset (like a building or main feature) to provide immediate payoff and prove the project's success.

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    The 'Work-in-Progress' Tour

    A showcase of both a major project currently under construction and the dramatic improvement of the surrounding area, demonstrating continuous effort and momentum.

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    The Humanizing Element

    A brief montage showing the people behind the work, adding a personal and relatable dimension to the project.

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    The 'Beyond Restoration' Reveal

    Highlighting a new feature or upgrade that wasn't part of the original asset, showing ambition and improvement beyond simple restoration.

  6. 6

    The Next Frontier

    The narrator identifies the next major phase or challenge of the project, shifting the viewer's focus to the future and showing the contrast between its past and current state.

  7. 7

    The Humble Outlook & Future Hook

    The creator acknowledges the remaining challenges and learning curve, which builds authenticity, and concludes by setting a clear future goal or timeline, encouraging a follow.

Themes

  • Transformation
  • Hard Work
  • Family Business
  • Entrepreneurship

Techniques

  • Before and After
  • Voiceover Storytelling
  • POV Shots

Trends

  • Transformation Content
  • Journey Documentation

Post caption

Just getting started Fairway Fields - Chesterville, Maine

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    Abandoned golf course 1 year transformation

  • contextual · middle

    JUNE 2025

Transcript

Better one year exactly since we bought this old abandoned golf course. I gotta show you the difference from today to last year. This is what our pro shop used to look like and this is what it looks like now. Down on the rank, we're building these seven covered bays. We're still hitting off mats down here best let's look at the difference between last year this time and this year this time. Looking freaking awesome. We good mom on the ball picker. We got dad mowing on the TriMax. We built this simulator bay last year. That was just an idea at one time. On the other side of the property is where we're starting on the worse side of things. Starting to see some solid progress down tier, but, you know, we're still learning how to maintain and grow fairways and greens. I mean, this is what it looked like down here last year this time, so pretty happy with the progress so far. It's just a long way to go.

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