@bluebirdhardwater
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@bluebirdhardwater And this is why you never give up! Bluebirds have arrived @slidersoysterbar just in time for the weekend💃
@bluebirdhardwater
Instagram · Vlog
@bluebirdhardwater And this is why you never give up! Bluebirds have arrived @slidersoysterbar just in time for the weekend💃
Performance
Video #29722 · Vlog
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The creator, a salesperson for a beverage brand, documents his attempt to sell his product into a bar that had previously said no. He approaches the manager, who initially rejects the product as another seltzer, but the creator overcomes this objection by clarifying it's not a seltzer and gets an employee to taste-test it. After a positive review from the employee, the creator successfully convinces the manager to place an order.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 65%
Selling into a bar that told us no...
Verbal hook · 10%
How's it going sir?
Visual hook · 25%
Point-of-view shot walking down a sunny, palm-tree-lined brick sidewalk, creating a sense of movement and place.
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Selling into a that already told us no...
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Establish a clear, high-stakes goal that involves overcoming a previous failure or rejection, creating immediate narrative tension and a clear objective for the viewer to follow.
Payoff
The protagonist confirms the successful outcome, expressing gratitude and solidifying the win, providing a satisfying resolution to the challenge established in the hook.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Delegated Gauntlet
A narrative structure where an initial rejection based on a false assumption is overcome by reframing the proposition and then submitting it to a third-party judge, whose positive verdict secures the final 'yes'.
The Initial Rejection
The protagonist makes their initial approach and is immediately met with a firm 'no' based on a preconceived notion or category assumption from the gatekeeper.
The Category Pivot
The protagonist challenges the gatekeeper's core assumption, reframing the product or idea to bypass the initial objection and create a new opening for consideration.
The Third-Party Trial
The gatekeeper, still hesitant, delegates the decision to a neutral third party, transferring the stakes and introducing an impartial judge whose opinion they trust.
The Value Proposition Pitch
The protagonist delivers a concise, data-driven pitch to the new decision-maker, highlighting key benefits and differentiators before the final test.
The Impartial Verdict
The third-party judge tests the product or idea and delivers a clear, positive verdict, providing the social proof needed to influence the original gatekeeper.
The Concession
The original gatekeeper, influenced by the trusted third-party's verdict, concedes and agrees to the protagonist's proposal, often with a moment of lighthearted humor.
And this is why you never give up! Bluebirds have arrived @slidersoysterbar just in time for the weekend💃
title · beginning
Selling into a bar that told us no...
It going, sir? My name is Trevor. I'm with a company named Bluebird Hardwater. Have you tried them? No. But I'm not gonna bring rank more seltzers in. I've got too many already. Well, what if I told you it wasn't a seltzer? I don't rank, but let me get him to taste them. Depending on what he says, I'll make a decision. Zero bubbles, zero sugar, only 88 calories, the lowest on the market. Pretty good. Alright? Yeah. I think it's so better. Yeah? Oh, they're both good. I've been in the door or something. Hell, yes. You're the man. Thank you. We'll get some hats to you guys, some shirts, all that good stuff. That's good. You want me to buy them? I buy someone must call when I do my order on Monday. Awesome. You're the best. Thank you so much.