@korimeloy
Instagram · Graphic Yap
@korimeloy comment “SKIN” for the free blog post on my experience healing my own melasma over the last few years with MORE sun, not less. *not medical advice*
@korimeloy
Instagram · Graphic Yap
@korimeloy comment “SKIN” for the free blog post on my experience healing my own melasma over the last few years with MORE sun, not less. *not medical advice*
Performance
Video #30143 · Graphic Yap
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The creator shares her personal story of healing melasma by challenging the conventional advice to avoid the sun. She shows a 'before' photo of her skin from ten years prior, contrasts it with her current appearance despite living in a sunny climate, and argues that more sun exposure was key to her healing. She concludes with a call-to-action, offering a free blog post on the topic to viewers who comment a specific word.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 65%
I HEALED MY MELASMA WHEN EXPOSING MY SKIN TO *MORE* SUN, NOT LESS.
Verbal hook · 30%
Alright. I told y'all I would dig in the archives and find a photo of when I was doing melasma like it was my job.
Visual hook · 5%
A woman with sun-kissed skin and blonde hair speaks directly and engagingly to the camera in a well-lit, indoor setting.
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Steal this for your own video
I HEALED MY BY DOING *MORE* , NOT LESS.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A bold, on-screen text overlay that presents a thesis directly opposing conventional wisdom, creating immediate intrigue and a desire to see proof.
Payoff
A low-friction Call to Action that instructs the audience to perform a simple engagement action (e.g., comment a keyword) in exchange for the valuable resource, simultaneously boosting metrics and delivering the promised information.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Contrarian Transformation
To prove a counter-intuitive thesis by presenting a dramatic personal transformation as evidence, then funneling the engaged audience to a deeper resource via a comment-based Call to Action.
The Promise of Evidence
The creator verbally acknowledges the bold claim and promises to deliver archived visual proof, setting a clear expectation for the viewer.
The 'Before' State Reveal
The creator presents dramatic visual evidence of the initial problem state, often framed with language that heightens its impact, to establish a low starting point for the transformation.
The 'After' State Contrast
The creator presents their current, improved state and provides context (e.g., time passed, challenging conditions) to emphasize the magnitude and resilience of the transformation, making the result seem even more impressive.
The Reinforcing Proof
The creator points to an incidental, 'always-on' piece of evidence in their current life that proves they are living by their contrarian thesis, dispelling skepticism.
The Thesis Re-Confirmation
The creator explicitly refutes the conventional wisdom and restates their contrarian thesis as the direct cause of their positive transformation, cementing the video's core message.
The Value-Add Funnel
The creator transitions from their personal story to offering a free, in-depth resource (e.g., blog post, guide) that explains their method, providing further value and establishing authority.
comment “SKIN” for the free blog post on my experience healing my own melasma over the last few years with MORE sun, not less. *not medical advice*
title · beginning
I HEALED MY MELASMA WHEN EXPOSING MY SKIN TO *MORE* SUN, NOT LESS.
contextual · beginning
getting ready for the jump scare.
informational · middle
10 years & 3 pregnancies later, living in hawai'i with year-round sun.
call-to-action · end
comment “SKIN” & i’ll send you my blog post on this.
Alright. I told y'all I would dig in the archives and find a photo of when I was doing melasma like it was my job. I found it. I'm delivering. Here it is. I've got no makeup on my face. I wanna show you guys what my skin looks like now because I was 25 when I took that photo. I'm turning 34 this tier, so I have almost ten years on that photo of sun exposure, of aging, and yet this is what my skin looks like now. My hair color is literally evidence of how much sun is in my everyday life, how much sun I've gotten since that photo. I don't color my hair. It is completely natural, bleached from the sun. So this idea that I believed at the time that if you go out in the sun and expose your skin to the sun, that it's gonna keep making melasma worse, it made my skin worse. It wasn't until I actually exposed my skin to the sun that it started to heal. I did a whole write up on this, whipped it up on a blog for you guys. It's free. You can comment skin. I'll send that to you right away. Not medical advice. You guys check it out.