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Trending short videosCreator shares mole removal results
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@alishamarie

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@alishamarie the molina saga continues 馃 if you鈥檝e kept up with my series on the process of removing my mole, you鈥檒l know that the dermatologist sent my mole to the lab to get it tested. here are the results!! I鈥檒l make another update soon for the 1 month update!! #skin #dermatologist #reveal #skincare #mole #results

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Performance

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620.8K
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Comments
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Engagement
8.3%
Outlier
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Length 路 25 Jun 2025
1:08

Video #8363 路 Yap

Creator shares mole removal resultsfrom @alishamarie

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Overview

The creator shares a real-time update, announcing she has received the pathology results for two moles she had removed. She provides context on her "mole saga," explaining one was suspicious, then reads the good news from her phone that the atypical mole was fully removed. She expresses immense relief and joy, uses the moment as a PSA to encourage skin checks, and promises a one-month update to conclude the video.

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Simple outline

  1. 1Announce imminent reveal
  2. 2Share live discovery process
  3. 3Deliver emotional reaction
  4. 4Provide universal advice

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Related videos

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Classification

Format
Concepts
Journey DocumentationVulnerable MonologueSurprise RevealPublic Service Announcement

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook 路 55%

THE RESULTS FOR THE MOLES I REMOVED

Verbal hook 路 40%

You guys, I think I finally got my results for the two moles that I got removed.

Visual hook 路 5%

A medium close-up of the creator looking at her phone with an expression of anticipation, creating immediate curiosity about the results she is about to receive.

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

Immediately state that the results or resolution to a long-running problem are about to be revealed, creating instant suspense by showing the source of the information (e.g., a phone).

Payoff

The payoff is twofold: the emotional satisfaction of the positive resolution and the added value of the universal advice, leaving the viewer feeling both relieved and informed.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Live Reveal Saga

The creator shares the real-time discovery and emotional reaction to the resolution of a previously established, ongoing personal conflict, then pivots to a universal lesson.

  1. 1

    The Stakes Recap

    Briefly summarize the backstory and the central conflict, reminding the audience why the impending reveal is significant and emotionally charged. This establishes the stakes for new viewers.

  2. 2

    The Real-Time Reading

    Engage with the source of the information (a message, an email, a letter) on camera, reading it aloud for the first time so the audience discovers the outcome simultaneously with the creator.

  3. 3

    The Emotional Climax

    Display a genuine, unfiltered emotional reaction to the news, providing a cathartic release and payoff for the viewer's investment in the story.

  4. 4

    The Universal Pivot

    Transition from the personal story to a broader, actionable piece of advice or a public service announcement, adding value and purpose for the audience beyond the narrative.

  5. 5

    The Sequel Hook

    Conclude by teasing the next installment or update in the ongoing 'saga,' creating a forward-looking narrative loop that encourages follows and continued engagement.

Themes

  • Health awareness
  • Vulnerability
  • Relief
  • Personal journey

Techniques

  • Personal storytelling
  • Direct address
  • Real-time reaction

Trends

  • Documenting personal journeys
  • Health transparency

Post caption

the molina saga continues 馃 if you鈥檝e kept up with my series on the process of removing my mole, you鈥檒l know that the dermatologist sent my mole to the lab to get it tested. here are the results!! I鈥檒l make another update soon for the 1 month update!! #skin #dermatologist #reveal #skincare #mole #results

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  • title 路 beginning

    THE RESULTS FOR THE MOLES I REMOVED

Transcript

You guys, I think I finally got my results for the two moles that I got removed. Wait. You guys, the mole saga continues. This is crazy. For those of you who haven't been on the Molina mole saga, obviously, I removed my, like the big one I had here. They didn't think this one was, like, atypical or anything. It was more cosmetic, but the one on my arm, they said, looked suspicious. Oh my god. Yay. Hi, Alicia. We just wanna let you know that we got the pathology results from your excision, and we were able to remove all of the severely atypical moles. So the site is clear. No further treatment is necessary. Let me know if you have any questions or concerns about your healing. Oh my god. Yay. They got everything, so I don't have to go back and get any more removed, but wow. Oh my god. I, like, I saw the message. I was like, I have to film this and update everyone. Oh my god. Reminder to get your skin checked because you never know what could be a serious problem, and I feel like it's something, like, a lot of people don't want to get checked. But yeah. Wow. Oh my god. I feel so relieved. Also, tomorrow's gonna be exactly a month since I got them removed, so I'll do a full one month update, for you guys. But wow. The most random series, but I hope you're enjoying.

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