@hallylead
Instagram · Skit
@hallylead When you want someone to care, OnlyFan™ is there.⛳️ With: @margauxbrooke, @hallylead Written by: @carlychaikin, @hallylead, @forrestshaw, @awantuck, @jameslead, @thetomboyproductions Directed by: @jaylarsoncomedy Produced by: @wearebetterco @ryankreppein, @taylorhingtgen
Performance
Video #45551 · Skit
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A woman explains to her skeptical friend her new, lucrative business venture: a parody service called 'OnlyFan' where she gets paid by men to listen to them talk about their golf games. She demonstrates the process by taking a client call and then reveals a cheat sheet of generic golf phrases that makes the job easy. The friend is then convinced to try it herself, successfully handling a call from a new client using the provided cheat sheet.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 50%
OnlyFan™
Verbal hook · 45%
I've been making a ton of cash talking to men on OnlyFans.
Visual hook · 5%
A professionally shot close-up of a woman speaking earnestly in an upscale restaurant setting, creating a cinematic and intriguing opening.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A statement that intentionally misleads the audience by referencing a familiar, often controversial, concept to create immediate intrigue and subvert expectations.
Payoff
The skeptic successfully uses the solution and has a moment of delighted realization, validating the absurd premise and providing a satisfying resolution that confirms the concept's surprising effectiveness.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Absurd Solution Sketch
Presenting a comically niche and overly-systematized solution to a highly relatable, everyday problem, framed through the eyes of a skeptic being converted.
The Comedic Reframe
The initial misunderstanding is corrected, revealing a pun or twist that establishes the true, comically absurd premise of the narrative.
The Premise Exposition
The mechanics of the absurd concept are explained, prompted by a skeptical character who acts as an audience surrogate and asks clarifying questions.
The Relatable Justification
The absurd concept is grounded in a common, relatable human problem or social stereotype, making the 'need' for the solution understandable and humorous.
The Live Demonstration
The concept is shown in a practical, real-time application, proving its function and escalating the comedy from a theoretical idea to a tangible, working system.
The System Reveal
A 'secret weapon' or tool (like a cheat sheet) is introduced that makes the absurd solution surprisingly easy or formulaic, adding a layer of mechanical comedy.
The Skeptic's Trial
The skeptical character is prompted to try the solution themselves, moving them from a passive observer to an active participant in the climax of the sketch.
When you want someone to care, OnlyFan™ is there.⛳️ With: @margauxbrooke, @hallylead Written by: @carlychaikin, @hallylead, @forrestshaw, @awantuck, @jameslead, @thetomboyproductions Directed by: @jaylarsoncomedy Produced by: @wearebetterco @ryankreppein, @taylorhingtgen
branding · beginning
OnlyFan™
branding · middle
OnlyFan
informational · middle
Nice bounce back.
informational · middle
That's gonna happen out there.
informational · middle
A bad day of golf is better than a good day at work.
I've been making a ton of cash talking to men on OnlyFans. You're getting naked on the Internet for money. Not OnlyFans. OnlyFans. What is that? It's a phone line where men can call in to talk to someone about their golf game. Why would they pay for that? When a man finishes playing a round of golf, all he wants is to talk to his wife or his girlfriend about it. But they don't care. That's where I come in. They pay me to listen. I'm literally their only fan. What do they say? What his score was, what his score should have been, how he should have warmed up longer on the rank, a cart girl that he thinks is into him. Oh, it's it's Oliver. He's one of my regulars. He says he's an eight handicap, but in reality, he's probably a 15. This will be quick. Hey, Ollie. Three birdies in a row. Wow. That must be a new record for you. Oh, my hot dog's here. Oh, you're only at the turn? Well, call me when you're done. I love you. That's it? Simple as that. I mean, most of the tier, you just have to say, uh-huh. But if you get stuck, OnlyFans gives you this cheat sheet. Nice bounce back. That's gonna happen out there? A bad day of golf is better than a good day at work. Oh. Looks like a newbie. I don't want it. There's nothing to it. Trust me. Hello? Hey. So I was playing the round of my life today. I was plus two through seven, and then I hit a sprinkler head on eight, and then my ball went into the lake, and then there's the wheels fell off. Bad break. I no, right? I mean, and then my five iron somehow wasn't in my bag. You know that's my favorite club. Slow golfers are the worst. Oh, the worst. Out of rhythm. This is so easy. Wait until August when rank fantasy comes around. It's this. But for fantasy football, a lot of injury report talk. Even Tiger couldn't have pulled that off.