@gabetheelectrician
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@gabetheelectrician PART 7 READING CUSTOMERS EMAILS 🤝 #fyp #electriciansoftiktok #apprentice #electrician #construction
@gabetheelectrician
TikTok · Prop Yap
@gabetheelectrician PART 7 READING CUSTOMERS EMAILS 🤝 #fyp #electriciansoftiktok #apprentice #electrician #construction
Performance
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An electrician reads a lengthy and detailed email from a potential customer who wants a massive amount of electrical work done for a garage conversion but has an extremely unrealistic budget of $650, based on advice from a friend. After detailing the customer's absurd demands for pricing approval and scheduling, the electrician calmly closes his tablet and states that he will be passing on the job.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
WHAT'S UP GUYS?
Verbal hook · 50%
What's up, guys? It's Gabe, the electrician here, and here's part seven of reading customer's emails.
Visual hook · 5%
A close-up, low-angle shot of the creator sitting in the driver's seat of his work truck, immediately establishing his profession and creating an authentic, 'in the field' context.
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Steal this for your own video
What's up, guys? It's , the here, and here's part of .
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Directly address the audience, state the premise of the content series, and explicitly build anticipation for the specific story about to be told.
Payoff
The creator delivers a calm, understated, and final rejection of the entire proposition, providing a cathartic and humorous resolution that contrasts with the complexity and absurdity of the request.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Unreasonable Request
A dramatic reading of a real or fictionalized customer/client request that starts reasonably but escalates into absurdity, culminating in a simple, deadpan rejection from the creator.
The Plausible Setup
The narrative begins by presenting the initial, seemingly normal and reasonable part of a request or situation. This grounds the story and sets a baseline for the absurdity to come.
The Scope Explosion
The creator details the full, extensive scope of the request, revealing it to be a much larger and more complex undertaking than initially implied.
The Absurd Anchor
A single, wildly unreasonable constraint (e.g., budget, timeline, expectation) is introduced. This becomes the central conflict of the narrative.
The Red Flag Parade
A rapid succession of secondary demands, justifications, and conditions are layered on top of the absurd anchor, each one making the situation more untenable and frustrating.
PART 7 READING CUSTOMERS EMAILS 🤝 #fyp #electriciansoftiktok #apprentice #electrician #construction
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WHAT'S UP GUYS?
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ELECTRICIAN HERE
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7 OF READING
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CUSTOMERS EMAILS
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LOVE THIS ONE
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QUOTE FOR THE EDITION.
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HELLO. WE'RE ENCLOSING
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ADD A BEDROOM, BATHROOM AND LAUNDRY AREA AND WOULD QUOTE.
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16 OUTLETS, 12 A CEILING FAN,
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BATHROOM EXHAUST FAN, VANITY LIGHT, SMOKE DETECTOR,
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AND HOOKUPS FOR THE DRYER.
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AND A MINI SPLIT.
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THE EXISTING PANEL OPPOSITE SIDE OF THE HOUSE AND SO WE MAY SUB PANEL AS
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MINE WHO'S ELECTRICIAN SAID THE ELECTRICAL SHOULD RUN AROUND $650
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SINCE THE WALLS ARE OPEN. HE HASN'T BEEN OUT HIM PICTURES.
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WE ALREADY BOUGHT THE LIGHT FIXTURES NEED TO BE
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HE WAS ORIGINALLY BUT HIS SCHEDULE HASN'T WORKED OUT.
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FIND SOMEONE LOCAL WHO CAN STAY PRICE.
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PLEASE BREAK DOWN ANYTHING OVER 650 HIM BEFORE WE APPROVE IT.
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MAKE SURE WE AREN'T BEING CHARGED IF YOUR CREW IN A FEW
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OUR. OUR DRYWALL FOR THURSDAY.
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FINISHED BEFORE THEN. BUT WE'RE AVAILABLE MONDAY AND TUESDAY AFTERNOON IF YOU WANT TO COME AND LOOK.
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ALRIGHT, I'M GONNA HAVE TO PASS ON THAT ONE.
What's up, guys? It's Gabe, the electrician here, and here's part seven of reading customer's emails. And you're gonna love this one. Quote for the addition. Hello. We're enclosing our garage to add a bedroom, bathroom, and laundry area, and good like an electrical quote. We need about 16 outlets, 12 recessed lights, a ceiling fan, bathroom exhaust fan, vanity lights, smoke detector, and hookups for the washer and the dryer, and a mini split. The existing panel is on the opposite side of the house and looks full, so we may need a small sub panel as well. A friend of mine who's rank electrician said the electrical should run around $650 since the walls are open. He hasn't been out here, but I sent him pictures. We already bought the light fixtures, so these wouldn't need to be included. He was originally going to help us, but his schedule hasn't worked out. We're hoping to find someone local who can stay close to that price. Please break down anything over 650 so I can send it to him before we approve it. He said to make sure we aren't being charged for a full day if your crew can finish it in a few hours. Our our drywall guy is scheduled for Thursday. We need you finished before then, but we're available Monday and Tuesday afternoon if you want to come and look. Alright. I'm gonna have to pass on that one.