@aka__vinnie
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@aka__vinnie good cancer #losangeles #cityplanning #apartment #lalife #culvercity #urbanplanning #architecture
@aka__vinnie
Instagram · Skit
@aka__vinnie good cancer #losangeles #cityplanning #apartment #lalife #culvercity #urbanplanning #architecture
Performance
Video #5669 · Skit
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The creator role-plays as an architect designing a new apartment complex in Los Angeles. He satirically brainstorms a terrible name, draws a generic rectangular building with ugly balconies, adds useless amenities like cornhole, fills the ground floor with car-centric businesses while calling it "walkable," and designs an absurdly small "mini-studio" for an exorbitant price, ending with an ironic wish to live there himself.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
POV: you are designing a brand new apartment complex in LA
Verbal hook · 40%
Okay. If I can just come up with one good design, we'll spread this around the city like cancer.
Visual hook · 5%
A creator sits at a desk with a blank notepad and markers, poised to begin a design process, creating anticipation for the drawing.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Establish a relatable 'Point of View' scenario and immediately state a cynical or controversial objective for the creative process.
Payoff
The creator expresses a personal desire for the thing they've just created, ironically revealing they are excluded from or victimized by the very system they are perpetuating.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Creator's Paradox
A character satirically designs or creates a product/system that embodies a widely criticized modern trend, only to reveal at the end that they are also a victim of the very system they are creating.
The Flawed Foundation
The creator makes an initial, comically poor decision (e.g., a terrible name, a flawed premise) that establishes the satirical tone and their lack of self-awareness.
The Aesthetic Cliché
The creator applies a series of visually generic and uninspired design elements, mocking the cookie-cutter nature of the target trend.
The Performative Feature
The creator adds a token, trendy, but ultimately low-value feature to create a false sense of quality or community.
The Soulless Core
The creator incorporates elements that are meant to signal a positive value (e.g., 'community,' 'convenience') but are executed in a generic, corporate, and disconnected way.
The Unattainable 'Solution'
The creator reveals the core offering, highlighting its primary flaw, such as an absurdly high cost for a low-value product.
good cancer #losangeles #cityplanning #apartment #lalife #culvercity #urbanplanning #architecture
title · beginning
POV: you are designing a brand new apartment complex in LA
Okay. If I can just come up with one good design, we'll spread this around the city like cancer. But like good cancer, I yes? Okay. How about a friendly name for this building? The Adolf. Oh. Fucking Adolfa. Whatever. Okay. Let's do a striking rectangular design for the building with nice alternating orange and green balconies. Timeless. Oh, yeah. Almost forgot tier cornhole. Okay. Instead of designated parking, let's do three different businesses on the 1st Floor. I want this building to feel like a walkable neighborhood, a la Bartholomew. So let's do a UPS store, a fucking, chiropractor, and, Quiznos. Our flagship apartment will be our budget friendly mini studio starting at $3,600 a month. I just wish I could live in a place like this one day.