@shaneohgolfs
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@shaneohgolfs
Instagram · Greenscreen Talking Head
@shaneohgolfs Golf has welcomed a TON of newcomers recently & we ALL need to be better… #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #golfers #golfswing #golftips #golfcoach #fyp
Performance
Video #12296 · Greenscreen Talking Head
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The speaker discusses the state of golf and suggests a return to basics. He then presents five etiquette non-negotiables for golfers, including being quiet, filling divots, playing ready golf, shaking hands, and avoiding unsolicited swing advice. He emphasizes the importance of these rules for all players, regardless of experience level.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 55%
What is happening to GOLF???
Verbal hook · 30%
Good is so broken, I think we just need to go back to the basics.
Visual hook · 15%
Image of an overturned golf cart with debris scattered around.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Presents a problem statement about the current state of golf.
Payoff
Encourages viewers to follow for more golf content.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
Etiquette Checklist
Highlighting the importance of golf etiquette and providing a list of non-negotiable rules to follow.
The Problem Statement
Introduces the idea that golf is broken and needs to return to basics.
Etiquette Introduction
Introduces the concept of etiquette non-negotiables.
Rule Presentation
Presents each rule with a title card and visual example.
Rule Explanation
Explains the importance of each rule and provides context.
Rule Reinforcement
Reiterates the rule and its importance.
Golf has welcomed a TON of newcomers recently & we ALL need to be better… #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #golfers #golfswing #golftips #golfcoach #fyp
title · beginning
What is happening to GOLF???
title · middle
5. BE QUIET
title · middle
4. FILL YOUR DIVOTS
title · middle
3. PLAY READY GOLF
title · middle
2. SHAKE HANDS
title · middle
1. STOP GIVING SWING ADVICE
Good is so broken, I think we just need to go back to the basics. So here are five etiquette non negotiables that we all need to be following, whether we've been playing the game for fifty days or fifty years. Number five, shut up politely, please. Just for twenty seconds. As soon as somebody addresses their ball, stop telling your story. It can wait. Give them the respect to hit their shot in peace and quiet. And if you're one of those people that's gonna say, well, I don't mind a little bit of better. Sorry. Everybody's not as cool as you. Number four, fill your divots. If any amount of grass is uprooted out of the earth, take the sand that's on the golf cart, turn it upside down, and fill your divots. Number three, play ready golf. We're not in competition, and bogeys don't hold honors on the tee box. Now if you wanna honor birdies, completely respect that. Don't hop in front of a birdie. Fill your divots. And if you like golf content like this, make sure you're following. Number two, and this one might be a hot take. Shake your playing partner's hands after the round. You just played 18 holes with them. Whether it's friends, family, or a stranger, shake their hand. We gotta go back to the basics. Fill your divots. Number one, stop giving unsolicited swing advice. This goes for everybody. Unless someone asks you, keep your opinions to worse, especially the older generation, to women at driving ranges. Stop. Fill your divots.