@life.withkeri
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@life.withkeri
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Video #25803 · Yap
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The creator delivers a monologue from her bathtub, starting with the premise that she isn't afraid to discipline her children in public. She then recounts a detailed story of her 7-year-old son's poor sportsmanship at a street hockey game, describing how she aggressively confronted him by snatching his stick, grabbing his helmet, and screaming in his face. She concludes by stating that his behavior changed immediately and contrasts her firm parenting style with that of other, more timid mothers, asserting she is embarrassed by her son's behavior, not her reaction to it.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
ONE THING ABOUT ME IS I'M
Verbal hook · 50%
One thing about me is I'm not afraid to parent my kids in public.
Visual hook · 5%
An extreme close-up shot of the creator's face while she is in a bathtub, creating a very raw, intimate, and confessional visual hook.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A bold, polarizing statement that declares a core personal philosophy, immediately engaging viewers who either agree with or are challenged by the premise.
Payoff
The narrator reinforces their initial philosophy, often by contrasting their method with a weaker alternative and reframing the situation to solidify their moral high ground, leaving the audience with a clear and powerful takeaway.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Unapologetic Intervention
A personal story framework that establishes a strong, unapologetic belief, presents a real-world scenario that tests that belief, details a dramatic and decisive intervention, and concludes by showing the intervention's success, thereby validating the initial belief.
The Case for Intervention
The narrator provides specific, detailed evidence of a problem or transgression, building a logical and emotional justification for the action they are about to take.
The Failed Negotiation
The narrator describes a preliminary, more moderate attempt to resolve the situation which is met with defiance or failure, escalating the tension and proving the necessity of a more extreme measure.
The Decisive Action
The climax of the story, where the narrator describes their dramatic, physical, and unapologetic intervention in vivid, sensory detail. This is the core action that proves the initial thesis.
The Immediate Consequence
The direct and positive result of the intervention is shown. The problem is swiftly and effectively resolved, providing a satisfying payoff and validating the narrator's actions.
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ONE THING ABOUT
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ME IS I'M
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PARENT MY KIDS
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I'M NOT AFRAID
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PARENT THEM AT HOME.
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LIKE MY SON
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TONIGHT WAS BEING
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HORRENDOUS AT STREET HOCKEY.
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HE'S 7. HE
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WAS BEING A
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SORE LOSER,
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A POOR TEAMMATE,
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AND HE WAS
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JUST BEING NOT.
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HE WAS BEING
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BEING AWFUL
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AND I SAID,
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I SAID,
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NOW. HE CAME
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OVER AND SAID,
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MAKING UP EXCUSE,
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JUST BEING AWFUL.
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IT RIGHT NOW.
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GET OVER THERE
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WITH YOUR TEAM,
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AND IF YOU
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FEEL LIKE YOU
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GUYS ARE LOSING,
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TRY HARDER OR
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YOU'RE JUST GONNA LOSE.
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HE WAS LIKE, NO.
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LIKE THAT IN
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MY FACE.
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I SAID, OH,
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I DON'T. I
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DON'T THINK SO.
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OF MY SEAT
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SO MOTHERFUCKING FAST.
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I SNATCHED HIS
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HOCKEY STICK FROM
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HIS ARMS SO QUICKLY,
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THE CAGE OF
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HIS HELMET AND
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I GOT IN
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HIS FACE AND
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DON'T YOU DARE!
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AND I SCREAMED
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AT HIM.
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HE. HE GOT
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QUIET REAL QUICK,
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WENT, STOOD BACK
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OVER WITH HIS TEAM.
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CHANGED HIS FUCKING
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ATTITUDE AND HE
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OF THE GAME.
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YOU'D NEVER GONNA
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CATCH ME BEING
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LIKE, STOP, STOP!
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STOP IT RIGHT
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NOW. NO,
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NOT ME, GIRL.
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NOT ME. ALL
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THE OTHER MOMS
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ARE LIKE.
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FUCK THAT BEHAVIOUR.
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I'M NOT EMBARRASSED
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TO PARENT HIM.
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NEEDS TO BE PARENTED.
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I'M EMBARRASSED BY
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THAT BEHAVIOUR. UGH!
One thing about me is I'm not afraid to parent my kids in public. I'm not afraid to parent them the way I parent them at home. Like my son tonight was being horrendous at street hockey. He's seven. He was being a sore loser. He was being a poor teammate. And he was just being not he was being awful. He was being awful. And I said, get I said, stop it right now. He came over and said, making her big just being awful. I said, stop it right now. Get over there with your tier. And if if you feel like you guys are losing, try harder or you're just gonna lose. It's okay. And he was like, no. Like that in my face. I said, I don't I don't think so. I jumped out of my seat so in the fucking fast. I snatched his hockey stick from his arms so quickly and I grabbed the cage of his helmet and I got in his face and I said, Don't you dare. And I screamed at him. He he got quiet real quick and then he went and stood back over with his team and then he changed his fucking attitude and he played the rest of the game. You're never gonna catch me being like, Stop. Stop. Stop it right now. No. Not me, girl. Not me. All the other moms are like And I was like, no. Fuck that behavior. Fuck that. I'm not embarrassed to parent him the way he needs to be parented. I'm embarrassed by that behavior.