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@alyssalauren confess something (213) 563-5849 (all callers consent to having their voicemail shared prior to posting)
@alyssalauren
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@alyssalauren confess something (213) 563-5849 (all callers consent to having their voicemail shared prior to posting)
Performance
Video #26091 · Yap
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The creator sits in her car and plays a voicemail from an elderly man intended for his deceased wife, whose number she now has. She reacts with increasing emotion as the man reminisces about their love, mentions their son, talks about his loneliness and aging, and ultimately thanks the creator for the opportunity to leave the message.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 65%
man leaves a message for his deceased wife
Verbal hook · 20%
Alright. Let's listen to the voice mails I got today.
Visual hook · 15%
A woman sitting in a car looks directly at the camera with a gentle smile, creating an intimate and personal connection with the viewer.
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leaves a message for their deceased
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
An on-screen text overlay establishes a high-stakes, emotionally charged premise, immediately creating intrigue and setting a somber tone before the primary content begins.
Payoff
The speaker breaks the fourth wall of the recording, directly addressing the unintended listener (and by extension, the viewer). They express gratitude for the opportunity to share, transforming the act of listening from a passive observation into a meaningful, shared experience.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Eavesdropped Confession
The video presents a raw, authentic audio recording of a deeply personal and emotional monologue, framed by the real-time, non-verbal reaction of a listener. The listener acts as an emotional surrogate for the audience, guiding and validating their response to the unfolding story.
The Somber Introduction
The speaker establishes the context of the message, identifying the recipient and the painful passage of time, grounding the narrative in a relatable sense of loss.
The Generational Bridge
The speaker shares a mundane update about a third party (a child, a friend), contrasting the present with the past. This serves to show that life continues while simultaneously highlighting what has been lost.
The Courtship Flashback
The speaker pivots to a specific, charming memory from the beginning of their relationship, adding personality, depth, and a sense of sweet nostalgia to the narrative.
The Timeless Vow
The speaker makes a broad, heartfelt declaration about the quality and meaning of their time together, elevating the story from specific anecdotes to a universal statement on love and connection.
The Living Memorial
The speaker lists the tangible rituals and objects they use to keep the memory of their loved one alive, making the abstract concept of grief concrete and actionable.
The Hopeful Confrontation
The speaker acknowledges their own mortality not as an ending, but as a potential reunion, reframing a sad reality into a source of bittersweet hope and excitement.
The Intimate Confession
The speaker reveals a final, deeply personal truth about their inner world, delivering the emotional climax of the message.
confess something (213) 563-5849 (all callers consent to having their voicemail shared prior to posting)
title · beginning
man leaves a message for his deceased wife
contextual · beginning
It's been two years since I've seen you.
contextual · middle
and no matter how long we were together it still didn't feel like enough time.
contextual · end
but who knows maybe that means I'll see you soon. so that's exciting.
contextual · end
you gave me another opportunity to miss her.
Alright. Let's listen to the voice mails I got today. Hi. I'm just calling to send a message to my wife. Hi, honey. It's Beau. It's been, it's been two years, since I've seen you. You know, our son has a girlfriend that he would be mad to his phone. You believe that? It's on it's on those, those apps. It's what a weird thing that is, isn't it? Well, we didn't have that. I had to actually find you back then. And you, when I found you, you said no a lot. I had to I had to try a couple tier. Remember. I was probably really annoyed. We were together for so long. Every day felt like a new day with you. And no matter how long we were together, it still didn't feel like enough time. You're still always my best friend. You still have everything. I keep everything. You still have the old letters that we used to write. Still keep your picture with me, still go on the hikes, still on the walks, still rank you with me. It just came a little bit harder to do now. You know, I'm getting older. But, you know, I'll be the ones I'll see you soon, so that's exciting. I I still I see you every time I close my yes. So it makes me doing a bit. It's been really, really never pass up an opportunity like that. So, thank you. Okay. Bye bye.