@jennaphipps
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@jennaphipps we have a lot left to do 😂
@jennaphipps
Instagram · Vlog
@jennaphipps we have a lot left to do 😂
Performance
Video #34408 · Vlog
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The creator addresses the camera to counter the belief that her home renovation is nearly finished, then takes the viewer on a comprehensive tour of the house to showcase all the incomplete projects. She shows unfinished flooring, stairs, an unfinished powder room, and the lack of a kitchen upstairs, before moving downstairs to reveal a messy laundry room, an unfinished bathroom, and a bedroom used for storage. Finally, she shows the exterior, highlighting a dilapidated 1960s pool and the missing siding and soffits, concluding that they are far from being done.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Verbal hook · 65%
A lot of people have been saying that we're almost in the renovation.
Visual hook · 35%
A direct-to-camera shot of the creator speaking with an engaging and expressive face, establishing a personal connection with the viewer.
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Steal this for your own video
A lot of people keep saying we're almost done with , so let me show you every single we still have left.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A direct contradiction of a popular belief ('People think X, but I don't think so'), followed by an explicit invitation to see the proof ('Do you want to see?').
Payoff
The viewer is left with a clear, evidence-based understanding of the creator's reality, satisfying the promise of the hook and validating the initial premise.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Reality Tour
To debunk a common misconception by providing a systematic, escalating tour of contrary evidence, proving that the reality is far from the popular perception.
The Contrarian Premise
Establishes the central conflict between an external perception and the creator's internal reality, setting the thesis for the video.
The Evidence Gauntlet
A rapid-fire tour of multiple, distinct examples that support the initial premise. The examples are presented sequentially to build a case and create a sense of overwhelming evidence.
The Climax Reveal
Explicitly frames one piece of evidence as the 'biggest' or 'worst,' creating a peak moment of revelation and the strongest proof point for the argument.
The 'One More Thing' Kicker
Adds an additional, significant piece of evidence after the climax to emphasize the overwhelming scale of the situation and prevent a sense of resolution.
The Concluding Restatement
Summarizes the journey by acknowledging some truth in the original misconception ('a lot has been finished') but ultimately reaffirming the initial contrarian premise with a concluding statement of uncertainty.
we have a lot left to do 😂
A lot of people have been saying that we're almost in the renovation. Like, oh my goodness. It's gonna be done soon. Oh my good. Tier house is almost done. And I don't think so. Do you wanna see everything we still have to do? Okay. Worst, we kinda stopped the floor in tier, so everything downstairs is nowhere near done. We also don't have a finished kitchen, so we're still using the air fryer. This is our powder room, and that's also Nick on the roof right now worse on our our chimney, which is not done. Let me show you downstairs. We have many rooms down here. This is our laundry room. We at least have a laundry machine that works. This is a bathroom. Mhmm. The hallway. And then, I'm scared to show you. This is a bedroom that is a storage closet right now until everything's ready upstairs no we can move it. But I think the biggest one that's gonna take I don't even know how much tier, I wanna say months and months, is our pool. This is our pool. It's from the nineteen sixties and has not been touched, I don't think once. We also don't have our siding up or our soffits up, but that we're actually doing in the next month or so. So, yes, a lot has finished, but, I don't know if we'll be done soon.