@monte
Instagram · Speaker address
@monte WE HAVE SOME BAD NEWS :/
@monte
Instagram · Speaker address
@monte WE HAVE SOME BAD NEWS :/
Performance
Video #37035 · Speaker address
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The creator, as the founder of a hair product brand, announces the company is closing down due to opposition from the established 'Big Hair' industry. He details his product's revolutionary benefits, recounts the brand's struggle against its competitors, and then reveals a final, disguised shipment has arrived in the US. He concludes with an urgent call to action for viewers to buy the product before the brand disappears forever.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
We are officially closing MONTE down
Verbal hook · 15%
We are officially closing month down.
Visual hook · 40%
A group of four men in matching suits with their faces painted bright red stand in front of the Queensboro Bridge. The central figure holds a cardboard sign that says 'CLOSED', creating a visually jarring and intriguing opening.
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Steal this for your own video
We are officially closing down
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A shocking and counter-intuitive proclamation of failure (e.g., 'We're closing down') paired with dramatic visuals to create an immediate pattern interrupt and generate intrigue.
Payoff
A direct and urgent call to action that empowers the audience, framing their participation not as a simple transaction, but as a heroic act to ensure the underdog's survival.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Crisis Gambit
The narrative manufactures a business-ending crisis to create a compelling David vs. Goliath story. It frames the audience as the hero whose immediate action (purchase) is the only thing that can save the underdog protagonist from a powerful, unseen antagonist.
The Noble Mission
Establishes the backstory and positions the brand/protagonist as a revolutionary force for good, aiming to solve a major problem in their industry.
The Enemy Defined
Clearly identifies the inferior status quo or competing products that the protagonist's solution is designed to replace.
The Value Proposition Proof
A rapid-fire sequence showcasing the key benefits and superiority of the protagonist's solution, often with quick visual demonstrations.
The Antagonist Reveal
Introduces a powerful, often faceless, institutional enemy (e.g., 'Big Pharma', 'The Industry') who opposes the protagonist's mission.
The Villain's Attack
Escalates the conflict by detailing the specific, unfair actions the antagonist took to sabotage the protagonist, building sympathy and solidifying the underdog narrative.
The Pivot to the Audience
Transitions from recounting past struggles to a present-day declaration of resilience, directly inviting the viewer to become part of the story.
The Clandestine Operation
Reveals a clever, last-ditch plan or secret maneuver the protagonist has executed to circumvent the antagonist, adding a layer of intrigue and making the audience feel like insiders.
The Ultimatum & Ticking Clock
Establishes the high stakes of the current situation, creating urgency by stating that failure to act immediately will result in the protagonist's permanent demise.
WE HAVE SOME BAD NEWS :/
title · beginning
We are officially closing MONTE down
contextual · beginning
REVOLUTIONARY
informational · middle
✓ WASHES OUT WITH WATER ✓ LASTS ALL DAY ✓ RESTYLED IN AN INSTANT
contextual · middle
New York City
contextual · middle
LA
We are officially closing month down. Tier the last eight months, we have desperately tried to revolutionize the world of hair. By replacing damaging powder, greasy clay, flimsy sea salt with one life changing solution. Washes out with just better, lasts all day. We restyled at a most notice. The issue? Well, Big Hair didn't like it. They tried to block us launching in America, tried to steal our formula, and they even tried to sue us. Well, we aren't quitters, and that's why we need your help. As of today, a plane full of mont disguised with one letter change landed in our warehouse in New York and LA. And if we don't sell out out due to the risk of us bringing it tier, unfortunately, we will be gone. So America, get it while you rank.