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@shaneohgolfs What is your BIGGEST pet peeve on the golf course? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfing #golfaddict #golfers #golfswing #golftips #golfcoach #fyp
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Video #9602 · Yap
Guy lists top golf annoyancesfrom @shaneohgolfs
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Overview
The creator sits in his car and delivers a rapid-fire list of his top ten pet peeves regarding golf culture and etiquette. He uses jump cuts to transition quickly between points, mixing genuine frustrations about pro shops and lost balls with recurring comedic jabs at players who use PXG clubs.
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Simple outline
- 1Announce niche frustration list
- 2Rant about specific grievances
- 3Establish recurring comedic target
- 4Escalate to behavioral critiques
- 5Conclude with ultimate sin
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Classification
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Hook analysis
What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 50%
Top 10 Golf Pet Peeves ⛳️
Verbal hook · 35%
Top 10 golf pet peeves.
Visual hook · 15%
Close-up of a man in a car wearing a 'Golf is my love language' hat looking directly at the camera.
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Hook and payoff
The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Immediate establishment of the list topic and total item count to set expectations.
Payoff
A final plea for better community behavior, validating the feelings of the 'good' viewers.
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Narrative framework
The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Recursive Rant Listicle
A rapid-fire enumeration of niche-specific frustrations, utilizing a recurring 'running gag' item to create comedic rhythm amidst relatable complaints.
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The Institutional Grievance
Opens with a frustration related to the administration or venue, not other players, to build broad consensus.
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The Running Gag Setup
Introduces a hyper-specific, irrational, or opinionated dislike that will serve as the video's internal joke.
- 3
The Universal Pain
Describes a situational misfortune that happens to everyone, shifting sympathy to the viewer.
- 4
The Behavioral Correction
Directly addresses a specific bad habit, acting as a public service announcement.
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The Comedic Callback
Repeats the specific dislike from the setup (Beat 2) to establish the pattern and humor.
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The Ego Check
Criticizes social friction caused by arrogance or unwanted interaction.
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The Interrupted Callback
Starts the running gag again but cuts it off or varies it slightly to keep the joke fresh.
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The Reality Check
A longer, more serious monologue grounding the audience in the reality that the activity is meant to be fun, not professional.
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The Situational Obstacle
A quick, one-line mention of a universally hated rule or condition.
- 10
The Comprehensive Takedown
The final, longest point that aggregates multiple bad behaviors into one 'ultimate sinner' archetype.
Themes
Techniques
Trends
Post caption
What is your BIGGEST pet peeve on the golf course? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfing #golfaddict #golfers #golfswing #golftips #golfcoach #fyp
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title · beginning
Top 10 Golf Pet Peeves ⛳️
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1. Pro Shops
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3. Losing a ball that was in play
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4. Practice swing divots
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5...
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6. Swing Advice
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8. Try Hards
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9. Cart Path Only
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10. NO ETIQUITTE
Transcript
Top 10 good pet peeves. Number one, when the pro shop acts upset that you showed up for your tee time. Or just here to play good, not to ruin your day. Number two, dudes who play PXG golf clubs. Number three, hitting a ball that you rank the entire way. You saw it rank. It is in play. Then you get up there and you cannot find it. Number four, people who take divots on their practice swings. What are we doing? Stop doing that. Five, dudes who play PXG. Six, unsolicited swing advice, especially when it comes from somebody that's worse than you. If we want advice, we'll ask. Number seven, dudes who play number eight, people who take the game of golf too serious. Me and you, buddy, we're never gonna play professionally. It's okay to be competitive, but throwing your clubs, breaking your clubs, throwing a temper tantrum, it does nothing for you and you're not fun to play with. Number nine, car path only. Last better certainly not least, number 10, golfers that have no etiquette. They don't fill their divots. They don't rank the bunkers. They don't fix their pitch marks. They don't let people play through. They think they're the only people on the golf course. Have some etiquette.