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@fdotinc he reinvented the pen #startup #fyp #pen #journaling #tech #founder
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@fdotinc he reinvented the pen #startup #fyp #pen #journaling #tech #founder
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Video #26121 · Vlog
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The narrator tells the story of his friend, Mark, who invented a high-tech pen. He explains Mark's backstory of selling Apple Pencil tips, his motivation to create a pen with a real paper feel, and the advanced technology inside it. The video demonstrates how the pen digitizes notes and controls phone apps, and concludes with a call-to-action to see a live demo at the upcoming Blueprint Festival.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 15%
So my friend
Verbal hook · 75%
So my friend Mark invented a high-tech pen that tracks everything you write so you can use your phone from your notebook.
Visual hook · 10%
A medium shot of a man focused on writing in a physical notebook at a desk in a modern office setting, establishing a relatable context of work and creativity.
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Steal this for your own video
My friend invented a that lets you .
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Immediately introduce a fascinating, high-concept product through a personal, relatable lens (e.g., 'My friend invented...').
Payoff
A direct, low-friction call to action that invites the audience to participate in the upcoming event, converting passive interest into active engagement.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Founder's Quest
A narrative framework that humanizes a product by telling the personal story of its creator's journey, from a relatable problem and high-stakes sacrifice to the creation of an innovative solution, culminating in a time-sensitive call to action.
The Origin Story
Establish the protagonist's credibility and background by referencing a past success or relevant expertise, grounding their current endeavor.
The Noble Quest
Articulate a relatable problem the protagonist faced and the significant personal sacrifice they made to solve it, raising the emotional stakes and building empathy.
The Technical Deep Dive
Rapidly showcase the complex inner workings or impressive specifications of the solution to build authority and awe, often featuring the creator explaining the tech.
The Practical Magic Demo
Shift from theory to practice by demonstrating the solution's real-world benefits and use cases in a clear, compelling way, showing how it solves the initial problem.
The Imminent Reveal
Create urgency and FOMO by linking the product to a specific, upcoming event or opportunity where it will be showcased.
The Community Validation
Broaden the context by placing the protagonist and their invention within a larger community of innovators, providing social proof and increasing the event's perceived importance.
he reinvented the pen #startup #fyp #pen #journaling #tech #founder
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So my friend
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invented a high tech
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that tracks
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you write
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your phone
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notebook.
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1 year ago
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pen tips
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Pencil
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a million
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but
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tactile
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writing
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he spent
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went broke
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to develop
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3 cameras
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a motion sensor
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a pressure sensor
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All
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the best
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Saving
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you write
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& even
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your apps
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calendar
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contacts
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& posting
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media.
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the pen
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& possibly give some away
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Blueprint Festival
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founders
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off their
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last month
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of working
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lab.
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stop by
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Blueprint
No my friend Mark invented a high-tech pen that tracks everything you write no you can use your phone from your notebook. One year ago, Mark was selling pen tips for the Apple Pencil, which made him like a gazillion million dollars. But he missed the true tactile feel of writing on paper. So he spent all his money and went broke to develop this. It has three cameras, a motion sensor, a pressure sensor. We have a magnetometer to measure gravity because the orientation of the pen changes where you are on the planet. Also that you can get the best of both worse, saving everything you write to your devices and even controlling your apps, like the calendar, contacts, messages, and posting to social media. He's gonna demo the pen And possibly give some away. At the Blueprint Best, where 100 founders will show off their inventions from the last month of working in our hardware lab. If you wanna stop by, comment Blueprint.