@raitryna
TikTok · Graphic Yap
@raitryna Let’s pre-order the new iPhone 18 Pro #iphone #apple #tech #iphone18pro #money
@raitryna
TikTok · Graphic Yap
@raitryna Let’s pre-order the new iPhone 18 Pro #iphone #apple #tech #iphone18pro #money
Performance
Video #41803 · Graphic Yap
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The creator explains that his accountant advised him to spend money for a tax write-off, so he decides to pre-order the new iPhone 18 Pro. Using a screen recording overlay, he walks the audience step-by-step through the entire purchase process on Apple's website, narrating his choices for the model, color, and storage. He concludes by teasing future content where he will compare the new iPhone to another upcoming model for content creation purposes.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 58%
$1,300 tax write off Buying the new iPhone 18 Pro
Verbal hook · 42%
My accountant just called me and told me to spend some money to lower my tax bill...
Visual hook
The creator speaks directly to the camera in a casual bedroom setting, holding a small, unidentified object that creates initial curiosity. A large, high-contrast title text overlay immediately establishes the video's premise.
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Steal this for your own video
$ tax write-off Buying the new
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Presenting a significant purchase not as an indulgence, but as a savvy, justifiable solution to a relatable problem (e.g., a financial goal, a professional need).
Payoff
The video concludes with a final, broad prompt for community engagement, asking the audience for their own opinions or plans related to the topic, solidifying the creator-viewer connection.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Justified Purchase Walkthrough
This framework transforms a simple purchasing decision into a compelling narrative by framing it as a smart, justified action. The creator acts as a guide, walking the audience through every step of the decision-making and transaction process, creating a sense of shared experience and vicarious satisfaction.
The Financial Justification
The creator explains the logical or financial rationale behind the impending purchase, immediately positioning it as a strategic move rather than a frivolous one.
The Shared Mission
The creator explicitly invites the audience to participate in the process, framing the video as a collaborative or 'with me' experience to build rapport.
The Manufactured Urgency
A minor, low-stakes obstacle is introduced to create a slight sense of tension and a reason to act now (e.g., 'I almost missed it,' 'limited stock').
The Deliberation Walkthrough
The creator systematically goes through the available options, verbalizing their thought process for each choice (e.g., model, color, size), allowing the audience to follow their logic.
The Mid-Narrative Engagement Hook
A direct call-to-action for comments is embedded within the decision process, often tied to a potential future action like a giveaway, which incentivizes immediate interaction.
The Principle Declaration
The creator states a personal rule or piece of wisdom related to the purchase (e.g., financial advice), reinforcing their authority and values to the audience.
The Transactional Climax
The final moment of purchase is shown on screen, providing a clear, satisfying resolution to the main action of the video.
The Sequel Tease
Immediately after the purchase is confirmed, the creator introduces a future, related piece of content (e.g., a review, a comparison), creating anticipation and a reason to follow.
Let’s pre-order the new iPhone 18 Pro #iphone #apple #tech #iphone18pro #money
title · beginning
$1,300 tax write off Buying the new iPhone 18 Pro
informational · beginning
Tax write-offs, also known as deductions, reduce taxable income. By lowering your taxable income, you can reduce how much you owe.
Accountant just called me and told me to spend some money to lower my tax bill, and what better way to get some tax write ups than to buy the new iPhone 18 Pro. That just went live today, so let's go ahead and order it together. It's good apple.com. IPhone 18 Pro preorder. I was supposed to order this at 5AM today, but I slept in and I forgot to order it. So hopefully, they still have some stock left. IPhone 18 pro, not the max. We'll go with that new burgundy color. I really like the matte black as well, but I kinda like the new pop of color. It's a little different. So we'll go burgundy, $2.56. No trade in because I'm not a 100% sure yet if I wanna trade in this iPhone 16 pro or if I wanna give it to one of you guys. Comment below, and I might do a little giveaway. No trade in. Buy it outright. Never get into debt. Never spend money you don't have. I do have AppleCare. I don't use cases on any of my phones, but I do have the Apple AppleCareOne coverage plan, but I will add that to my plan later. No coverage. Perfect. Check out check out with Apple Pay. $1,276.94. Let's do it. And done. And just like that, I've ordered the iPhone 18 Pro in burgundy. I'm excited to pick it up, but I'm really fucking excited to pick up the iPhone Duo in about a month or so. I really wanna test it out, compare the two of them, and see which one is the best phone, not just for day to day use, but also which phone is the best for being a content creator. Let me know which phone you guys are picking up. Peace.