@carleeholmoe
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@carleeholmoe Thrift our Mortgage update!! I’m getting close! #thrifting #thrift #vintage #resell #reseller
@carleeholmoe
Instagram · Vlog
@carleeholmoe Thrift our Mortgage update!! I’m getting close! #thrifting #thrift #vintage #resell #reseller
Performance
Video #49224 · Vlog
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The creator provides an update on her personal challenge to pay her mortgage by thrifting and reselling items. She showcases seven different items she flipped during October, detailing the purchase price and sale price for each one. At the end, she calculates her total profit for the month, compares it to her mortgage goal, and asks the audience if they think she will succeed.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook
THRIFT OUR MORTGAGE
Verbal hook
I've been trying to thrift and resell to pay for our monthly mortgage, and here is the October update.
Visual hook
The video opens with a unique point-of-view shot from inside a shopping cart, looking out through two large, framed mirrors that reflect the creator and the environment, immediately establishing the thrifting theme.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
A direct statement establishing a high-stakes, relatable goal (paying the mortgage) and the unconventional method being used to achieve it (thrifting and reselling), framed as a periodic update.
Payoff
The payoff is the reveal of the total progress made so far, which satisfies the viewer's curiosity built up by the list of items, while the final question creates suspense for the next installment.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Progress Quest
Documenting the process of achieving a large, relatable goal by accumulating and showcasing a series of small, quantifiable wins within a specific timeframe.
The Mission Statement
The creator explicitly states the overarching goal and the specific, repeatable action they are taking to achieve it. This frames the video as a progress report in an ongoing series.
The Evidence Log
A rapid-fire sequence where individual 'wins' or units of progress are presented. Each item in the sequence follows a consistent micro-pattern to demonstrate the method's effectiveness.
The Tally & Status Update
The creator aggregates all the individual wins into a single, impressive progress metric, explicitly stating how close they are to the final goal, often as both a raw number and a percentage.
The Engagement Cliffhanger
The creator introduces a time-based constraint ('a little over a week') and asks a direct question to the audience, inviting speculation on the final outcome and encouraging them to follow for the conclusion.
Thrift our Mortgage update!! I’m getting close! #thrifting #thrift #vintage #resell #reseller
title · beginning
THRIFT OUR MORTGAGE
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Paid $20, sold $150
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Paid $24, sold for $80
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Paid $90, sold for $350
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paid $6, sold for $40
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paid $4, sold for $30
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Paid $9, sold for $80
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Paid $0, sold for $75
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October profit so far: $2,130 79% of our mortgage
I've been trying to thrift and resell to pay for our monthly mortgage, and here is the October update. This mid century modern mirror was on Facebook for $20. I bought it, and I sold it for $1.50. I got this Tommy Hilfiger leather jacket at the thrift store for $24, and I sold it for 80. This is the vintage sofa I bought at a yard sale for 90, and I sold it for $3.50. I found this lamp at Savers for $6. It's Kate Spade. I sold it for 40. I paid $4 for this bowl, and I got some use out of it. I had it in my house for decor for a little bit, and then I just sold it for 30. Spotted this quilt at Savers. It was giving cottage core. It was $9, and I sold it for 80. My daughter has had this car for a couple years. She outgrew it. It was a gift from Santa, so we paid 0, and I sold it for 75. Okay. This puts my October profit at 2,130, which is 79 percent of our mortgage. I have a little over a week. Do you think I'll make it?