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@ryanselvy The poor McLaren design team spent too much time tinkering under the hood on the new logo. They over-engineered the wordmark and brand identity into a logo with less character and identity than what they started with. The strategy and reasoning of the graphic design is sound, and well-intentioned. Trying to lean on their history to find authenticity. But their case study makes it evident they missed the forest for the trees. The old heritage assets they used lean generic since Bruce McLaren’s parents weren’t the billion-dollar moguls they are today. Someone just painted a nice clear sign on a nice local business. I think if they wanted to highlight the history with something more personal they’d need to use something like Bruce’s signature. Sadly this one just reads like a clothing brand like everlane. #graphicdesign #mclaren #branding

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Video #49425 · Graphic Yap

Creator critiques brand logo redesign.from @ryanselvy

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Overview

The creator analyzes and critiques McLaren's new logo redesign. He explains that while the new logo is a callback to the founder's family history, it results in a generic, minimalist wordmark that loses the brand's iconic 'speed mark' and resembles other fashion/tech brands. He argues that 'old doesn't equal iconic' and that the redesign ultimately creates a 'cold' identity, which is contrary to the intended heritage-based strategy.

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Simple outline

  1. 1Present a controversial change.
  2. 2Debunk the official reasoning.
  3. 3Introduce a core principle.
  4. 4Provide an analogous example.
  5. 5Deliver a synthesized verdict.

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 45%

BEFORE

Visual hook · 55%

A high-contrast, side-by-side graphic comparison of the old 'BEFORE' McLaren logo and the new 'AFTER' logo, immediately establishing the video's topic and central conflict.

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Open on a high-contrast split screen: [old version of the thing] labeled "BEFORE" on one side, [new version of the thing] labeled "AFTER" on the other, with a bold [dividing element] down the middle, held still so viewers can judge the change for themselves.

  • — Open on a high-contrast split screen: my client's cluttered old website homepage labeled "BEFORE" on one side, the new stripped-down homepage labeled "AFTER" on the other, with a bold neon red line down the middle, held still so viewers can judge the change for themselves.
  • — Open on a high-contrast split screen: the old packaging for a local coffee roaster labeled "BEFORE" on one side, the new minimalist packaging labeled "AFTER" on the other, with a bold white vertical divider down the middle, held still so viewers can judge the change for themselves.
  • — Open on a high-contrast split screen: a neglected backyard patio labeled "BEFORE" on one side, the finished renovation labeled "AFTER" on the other, with a bold black diagonal slash down the middle, held still so viewers can judge the change for themselves.

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

A direct 'Before vs. After' visual comparison that immediately establishes the subject of critique and prompts the viewer to form an initial opinion.

Payoff

The delivery of a conclusive, authoritative judgment that validates the viewer's initial skepticism and provides a satisfying, well-reasoned explanation for the subject's failure.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Expert Deconstruction

To establish credibility by first acknowledging the official strategy behind a change, and then systematically dismantling its execution by revealing a critical flaw, using analogies and expert principles to prove the final negative verdict.

  1. 1

    The Official Rationale

    To present the subject's own justification for the change, establishing the 'official story' that will be challenged.

  2. 2

    The Contrarian Rebuttal

    To immediately counter the official rationale with a more relatable, critical observation, often by comparing the subject to generic contemporaries. This creates the central conflict of the argument.

  3. 3

    The Strategic Concession

    To build narrator credibility by acknowledging the valid strategic thinking behind the decision, demonstrating an understanding of the subject's intent before critiquing the outcome.

  4. 4

    The Critical Nuance

    To introduce a core, expert principle that the subject's execution violated. This elevates the argument from mere opinion to a structured critique (e.g., 'Old doesn't always equal iconic').

  5. 5

    The Analogous Proof

    To illustrate the central flaw using a simple, powerful analogy involving a different, universally understood subject (e.g., 'It's like if IKEA did this...').

  6. 6

    The Core Asset Question

    To question the logic of removing the subject's most recognizable and valuable asset, contrasting it with a best-in-class example that manages its assets correctly.

  7. 7

    The Failed Compensation Analysis

    To analyze the new elements intended to replace the old, and explain precisely why they fail to compensate for the loss.

  8. 8

    The Final Verdict

    To synthesize all previous points into a concise, impactful judgment that declares the change a failure and explains why it is the opposite of its intended goal.

Themes

  • Brand identity
  • Heritage in branding
  • Design criticism
  • Minimalism in design

Techniques

  • Comparative analysis
  • Historical context
  • Case study
  • Analogical reasoning

Trends

  • Brand deconstruction
  • Expert commentary

Post caption

The poor McLaren design team spent too much time tinkering under the hood on the new logo. They over-engineered the wordmark and brand identity into a logo with less character and identity than what they started with. The strategy and reasoning of the graphic design is sound, and well-intentioned. Trying to lean on their history to find authenticity. But their case study makes it evident they missed the forest for the trees. The old heritage assets they used lean generic since Bruce McLaren’s parents weren’t the billion-dollar moguls they are today. Someone just painted a nice clear sign on a nice local business. I think if they wanted to highlight the history with something more personal they’d need to use something like Bruce’s signature. Sadly this one just reads like a clothing brand like everlane. #graphicdesign #mclaren #branding

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    BEFORE

  • title · beginning

    AFTER

  • contextual · beginning

    The new McLaren logo is

  • contextual · beginning

    callback to the sign at

  • contextual · beginning

    founder's parents'

  • contextual · beginning

    But all I can see

  • contextual · beginning

    is Everlane, Celine,

  • contextual · beginning

    Sonos,

  • informational · middle

    OLD ≠ ICONIC

  • contextual · middle

    Why is McLaren adding identifiable speed mark?

  • call-to-action · end

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