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@timmchiusano episode 13 - the resume review including a template shot at the end
@timmchiusano
Instagram · Interview Q&A
@timmchiusano episode 13 - the resume review including a template shot at the end
Performance
Video #19506 · Interview Q&A
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A career expert is stopped by a stranger in a subway station to review a printed resume. He provides immediate, actionable feedback on structuring the document for investment banking, specifically advising the addition of a narrative-driven bio at the top to define the candidate's mission.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 45%
DO YOU WANT TO LOOK
Verbal hook · 40%
Wanna look at my resume?
Visual hook · 15%
Medium shot of a man in a beanie walking through a subway station, immediately stopped by a stranger holding a document.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
The Cold Approach: A stranger interrupts the expert in a public setting with a high-stakes request ('Do you want to look at my resume?').
Payoff
The Digital Artifact: A static shot of the perfected template/document is displayed, converting the advice into a saveable resource.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Street Corner Consultant
Transforming a spontaneous public interaction into a high-value educational moment by auditing a stranger's work in real-time.
The Authenticity Check
Establishing the genuine nature of the interaction (confirming they don't know each other) and praising the 'audacity' to build emotional rapport with the audience.
The Context Intake
Rapidly gathering the necessary variables (current status, specific goal) to tailor the upcoming advice, signaling that this isn't generic wisdom.
The Live Diagnostic
Delivering specific, actionable critiques (narrative bio, hierarchy, metrics) that serve as the core educational value for the viewer.
The Validation Close
Ending the interaction with positive reinforcement to resolve the social tension and leave the viewer feeling inspired.
episode 13 - the resume review including a template shot at the end
title · beginning
DO YOU WANT TO LOOK
narrative · beginning
DID YOU KNOW WHO I WAS, OR YOU JUST
narrative · beginning
NOPE.
narrative · beginning
WHO YOU ARE.
narrative · beginning
ALL RIGHT. COOL.
narrative · middle
I AM WALKING, I SEE A RESUME, I'M LIKE, WHY NOT,
narrative · middle
BECAUSE I ALWAYS TRY TO BETTER MYSELF.
narrative · middle
IT PAYS OFF IN THE WILDEST OF WAYS
narrative · middle
WHEN YOU JUST THINK EITHER WHY NOT, OR LET ME TRY.
narrative · middle
THIS IS MY RESUME.
narrative · middle
I WAS SO HOPING THAT SOMEBODY WOULD EVENTUALLY BRING ME A PRINTED RESUME.
narrative · middle
LIKE, THIS IS MY JAM.
narrative · middle
YEAH, EXACTLY.
narrative · middle
SO, YOU'RE CURRENTLY IN SCHOOL?
narrative · middle
YEP, MY MASTER'S.
narrative · middle
TO DO?
narrative · middle
SO I ACTUALLY WANT TO TRADE.
narrative · middle
SO I WANT TO BE INVESTMENT BANKING.
narrative · middle
HERE'S MY TWO CENTS,
informational · middle
I WANT A BIO AT THE TOP.
narrative · middle
OKAY.
informational · middle
I WANT LIKE A FOUR SENTENCES OF KIND OF YOUR MISSION STATEMENT.
informational · middle
DON'T SAY HARD WORKING, LIKE, STAY AWAY FROM CLICHE STUFF.
narrative · middle
YEAH.
informational · middle
JUST ESTABLISH YOUR NARRATIVE.
narrative · middle
AND YOU THINK THAT SHOULD BE BELOW EDUCATION?
informational · middle
I THINK IT SHOULD BE TOP.
informational · middle
I THINK IT'S NAME, I THINK IT'S YOUR LIKE LITERALLY WHO YOU ARE.
informational · middle
AND THEN STRAIGHT INTO GIVE THEM FOUR SUPER PUNCHY SENTENCES
informational · middle
THAT EXPLAIN WHAT YOUR NARRATIVE IS.
informational · middle
I THINK EDUCATION COMES AT THE BOTTOM,
informational · middle
LIKE EDUCATION IS IMPORTANT, BUT PEOPLE WILL EVENTUALLY SEE THAT.
informational · end
LIKE BULLET BY BULLET THINK OF WHAT CAN YOU ADD IN FROM A METRICS PERSPECTIVE
informational · end
THAT MIGHT HELP JUST LIKE PUNCH IT UP A LITTLE BIT MORE.
narrative · end
BUT OTHERWISE IT'S DOPE.
narrative · end
FANTASTIC BACKGROUND.
informational · end
NAME MIDDLE LAST
informational · end
CORE COMPETENCIES
informational · end
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Wanna look at my resume? Absolutely. Did did you know who I was or you just saw the sign? Nope. I don't know who you are. Alright. Cool. Or just Even better. I'm walking. I see your resume. I'm like, why not? Because I always try to better myself. Yeah. Yeah. Dude, it pays off in the wildest of ways when you just think either why not or let me try. This is my resume. I was I was so hoping that somebody would eventually bring me a printed resume. Like, this is my jam. Yeah. Exactly. So you're currently in school? Yep. My master's. And what what do you wanna do? So I actually wanna trade. So I wanna be investment banking. Here's my 2¢. I want a bio at the top. Okay. I want, like, a quick four sentences of kind of, like, your mission statement. Mhmm. Don't say hard worse. Like, stay away from some of the cliche stuff. Yeah. Just establish your narrative. And you think that should be below education? I think it should be top. Okay. I think it's name. I think it's your like, literally who you are and then straight into give them four super punchy sentences that explain what your narrative is. I think education comes at the better. Like, education is important better people will eventually see that. Literally go through it and it's like bullet by bullet rank of what can you add in from a metrics perspective that might help just like punch it up a little bit more. But otherwise, it's dope. I mean, you have a fantastic background.