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@shaneohgolfs

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@shaneohgolfs So what do you think about this concept??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #golfers #golfswing #golftips #golfcoach #fyp

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Video #5278 · Greenscreen Talking Head

Golf problem and proposed solutionfrom @shaneohgolfs

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Overview

The creator identifies slow pace of play as a major issue in golf, breaks down the primary causes using survey data, and then showcases a real-world example of a golf course publicly posting a list of slow players as a potential solution to improve accountability.

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Simple outline

  1. 1State relatable community problem
  2. 2Use data to diagnose
  3. 3Propose a tangible solution
  4. 4Issue a collective call to action

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Related videos

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Classification

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Title Text HookImage Overlay

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Hook analysis

What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds

Title hook · 35%

Can we fix this MAJOR issue???

Verbal hook · 45%

So we all know that the pace of play is the biggest issue in golf, but how do we fix it?

Visual hook · 20%

A layered composition with the speaker in the foreground and a background image of a frustrated golfer, creating immediate visual context for the problem being discussed.

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Hook and payoff

The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back

Hook

Immediately state a universally acknowledged problem within a specific niche, framing it as a question to be solved and creating instant audience buy-in.

Payoff

Conclude with a broad, inclusive call to action that encourages the entire community to adopt the endorsed principle, empowering the viewer to be part of the solution.

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Narrative framework

The structural pattern this video runs on

Framework

The Community Problem-Solver

To identify a well-known frustration within a niche community, validate it with data, and then present a tangible, slightly provocative solution to spark discussion and provide value.

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    The Data-Backed Diagnosis

    Introduce external data (e.g., a survey, study, statistics) to break down the causes of the problem, lending credibility and moving the narrative from a simple complaint to an informed analysis.

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    The Empathy Bridge

    Translate the data and the problem into a shared, visceral emotional experience, creating a strong personal connection with the audience by describing a scenario they've all been in.

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    The Solution Pivot

    Use a direct question to cleanly transition the narrative from defining the problem to exploring a potential solution, signaling a shift in focus for the viewer.

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    The Tangible Solution Reveal

    Present a concrete, real-world example of a solution in action, making the fix feel achievable and not just theoretical.

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    The Concept Endorsement

    Analyze the proposed solution to endorse its underlying principle or concept, adding a layer of thoughtful nuance and strengthening the overall argument.

Themes

  • Accountability
  • Sports Etiquette
  • Problem Solving

Techniques

  • Direct address
  • Data presentation
  • Example-based argument

Post caption

So what do you think about this concept??? #golf #golfstagram #golfing #golfaddict #golfers #golfswing #golftips #golfcoach #fyp

Text overlays

  • title · beginning

    Can we fix this MAJOR issue???

  • informational · middle

    3. What are the biggest causes of slow play?

  • informational · middle

    2025 Pace of Play Offenses

  • contextual · middle

    This course posts all pace of play offenses in the club house

Transcript

So we all know that the pace of play is the biggest issue in good, but how do we fix it? Well, MyGolfSpa did a survey asking golfers what the biggest causes of slow play were. 18% of people said playing from the wrong tier. I think that should be drastically higher. Then we've got 52%, golfers who don't know etiquette and think they're JB Holmes. If you don't know JB Holmes, he won five PGA Tier events and competed in two Ryder Cups. We've all been here before, sitting on the edge of our push cart, sitting on the ground, sitting in the golf cart with our feet propped up, waiting for the group in front of us to finally get off the green. So how do we fix this? Well, here's a start. There's a golf course in North Carolina posting pace of play offenses. They've got the date they played, first and last names, and how long it took them to play around. No, let me be very clear tier. The actual pace on this list, four hours twelve minutes, four hours thirty one minutes, nothing wrong with that. But this concept is fantastic to hold people accountable. Let's all be better. In golf courses, that includes you. Six hour golf rounds are not fun for anybody.

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