@littlejoycoffee
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@littlejoycoffee open to suggestions. just not peppermint mocha
@littlejoycoffee
Instagram · Vlog
@littlejoycoffee open to suggestions. just not peppermint mocha
Performance
Video #12131 · Vlog
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The video opens with a coffee shop owner announcing they need to create a winter menu in one month and are asking for suggestions from their audience. They explain that the menu will be around for a while because winters in Minnesota last half a year. They emphasize that the menu can't suck and ask viewers to drop a comment with drink suggestions, threatening to block anyone who suggests a peppermint mocha.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 65%
we've got one month to make
Verbal hook · 5%
Hey.
Visual hook · 30%
A large piece of machinery is moving in front of the coffee shop.
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Steal this for your own video
We’ve got to make a that doesn’t suck.
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Acknowledge the upcoming seasonal change and the need for a new menu.
Payoff
Threatens to block anyone who suggests a specific, undesirable menu item.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
Crowdsourced Menu Creation
A business solicits ideas from its audience to create a new menu, promising to consider and potentially implement the suggestions.
The Time Crunch
Establishes a deadline for the menu creation, creating a sense of urgency.
The Minnesota Winter
Highlights the extended duration of winter in Minnesota, emphasizing the importance of the menu's longevity.
The Quality Mandate
Sets a clear expectation that the new menu items must be high quality.
The Idea Drought
Reveals the business's lack of inspiration, justifying the need for external input.
The Audience Invitation
Directly asks the audience for drink suggestions.
The Potential Reward
Promises to potentially include audience suggestions on the menu.
open to suggestions. just not peppermint mocha
title · beginning
we've got one month to make a winter menu
title · beginning
and we need your help
informational · middle
winters in minnesota last half a year
informational · middle
basically it can't suck
informational · middle
the only issue is
informational · middle
out of ideas
informational · middle
there's a drink
informational · middle
we should try
call-to-action · middle
drop a comment
informational · middle
and maybe we'll make it
informational · end
peppermint
informational · end
you're getting
informational · end
blocked
Hey. We've got one month to make a winter menu, and we need your help. Winters in Minnesota best for, like, half a year, so this menu is gonna be around for a while. Basically, it can't suck. The only issue is better trying a million drinks over the past year, we're we're out of ideas. So if there's a drink you think we should try, drop a comment and maybe we'll make it. If you say peppermint mocha, you're getting blocked.