@monte
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@monte NOW BACK IN STOCK. CHOOSE PERFECTION - WASHES OUT WITH JUST WATER - RESTYLEABLE UP TO 100KM/H - NATURAL LOOK AND FEEL - SMELLS BETTER THAN YOUR DESIGNER FRAGRANCE CHOOSE MONTE.
@monte
Instagram · Vlog
@monte NOW BACK IN STOCK. CHOOSE PERFECTION - WASHES OUT WITH JUST WATER - RESTYLEABLE UP TO 100KM/H - NATURAL LOOK AND FEEL - SMELLS BETTER THAN YOUR DESIGNER FRAGRANCE CHOOSE MONTE.
Performance
Video #29082 · Vlog
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The creator tells the origin story of his hair product brand, MONTE. He begins by describing his personal problem with flat hair, critiques the failures of existing products like sea salt sprays and clays, and explains how this frustration led him and his friend to invent their own solution despite their lack of experience in the hair industry. He then showcases the product's unique benefits, such as being wind-tunnel tested and washing out with just water, before announcing it's back in stock and concluding with a call to action to 'choose perfection'.
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What stops the scroll in the first 3 seconds
Title hook · 25%
The Truth about MONTE...
Verbal hook · 50%
How many times have you bought something only to realize that what you bought doesn't actually work?
Visual hook · 25%
A man with a red-painted face and styled blonde hair stands still while water is poured over his head from a terracotta jug, creating a visually striking and surreal image.
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Steal this for your own video
How many times have you tried only to realize it doesn't actually ?
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The promise the opener makes, and how the video pays it back
Hook
Pose a rhetorical question that taps into a universal consumer frustration, making the viewer feel seen and understood.
Payoff
Deliver a powerful, definitive call to action that reframes the purchase not just as a transaction, but as a choice for 'perfection' over the flawed alternatives.
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The structural pattern this video runs on
Framework
The Founder's Gauntlet
A narrative that establishes a universal problem, systematically disproves all existing solutions, and positions a new product as the inevitable, superior outcome of a founder's personal quest.
The Personal Struggle
Ground the universal problem in a specific, relatable personal story, making the abstract frustration tangible and human.
The Industry Failure Gauntlet
Systematically critique and dismiss common competitor solutions, explaining their specific flaws to establish a clear market gap and build viewer frustration with the status quo.
The Founder's Vow
Narrate the pivotal moment of realization where the creator decides to solve the problem themselves, framing the product's creation as a mission.
The Underdog Obstacle
Introduce a perceived weakness or lack of conventional qualification for the creators, establishing a compelling underdog narrative that builds empathy and intrigue.
The Solution Showcase
Unveil the new product and demonstrate its key benefits, explicitly linking each feature back as a direct solution to a previously mentioned pain point.
The Scarcity & Social Proof Trigger
Inject social proof and urgency by revealing the product's high demand (e.g., 'sold out'), validating its quality and encouraging immediate action upon its return.
NOW BACK IN STOCK. CHOOSE PERFECTION - WASHES OUT WITH JUST WATER - RESTYLEABLE UP TO 100KM/H - NATURAL LOOK AND FEEL - SMELLS BETTER THAN YOUR DESIGNER FRAGRANCE CHOOSE MONTE.
title · beginning
The Truth about MONTE...
How many times have you bought something only to realize that what you bought doesn't actually work? You see, growing up, I had an issue. Hair as fat as a pancake and no matter what I tier, nothing was quite right. Sea salt spray, about as high performance as a sieve collecting water. Hair powder, damages your hair. And clays, well, after just a few hours, your hair is so greasy and heavy that it becomes a game of rank you avoid your crush. So in 2022, my best mate and I came to the realization if no one else was gonna invent it, well, we would just have to do it ourselves. The only issue, my background, cancer research. And well, Matt, Matt's just really good at math. In eyes of the hair industry, what did we know? Well, we refuse to take no for an answer. And that's why we have the world's first and only wind tunnel tested product. So that your hair won't get messed up by the worse. It's why it washes out with just water no that you don't need gallons of shampoo to remove it. It's also why the texturizing tool smells better than your designer fragrance and feels like there's nothing in your hair. And the best news is after two months of being sold out, we're back. It's time to stop buying hair products that don't work. It's time to choose perfection.